I just want to state this is not a Kikyo bashing thing. It actually talks
nice about her..yea, well. This DOESN'T mean I like the ice cube, but I
just wanted to aim my writing in a new direction. The poem takes coverage
on Kikyo first, then it skips to other situations, like.actually I don't
wanna tell you. ^_^ But It's a good poem, I had it reviewed by my Aunt (who
is an 8th teacher) already. She, of course had no idea what this was about
exactly, but she did love it! So I think you all will too, because you know
what it's talking about...I know you do! No need to review unless you liked
it. Thanks, and enjoy it for what it's worth!
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Misty Forests
In Dedication to - Natalie Castallanos
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Misty Forests
Who is this woman I see past?
This lady of smiling children; their spirits to last
A tall tree she stood, at which she still awaits
She'll wait forever, even face all fates
Herbs, lanterns, and night rounded the small town's turn
Woman of earth, watch her corpse burn
The arrow enchanted, the bow of no mercy
It races, it soars, it strikes up above
He speeds to leave all, gloating of his prize
The pain, sorrow, and betrayal glowed in his eyes
All, but his love
This encountered before she dies
And him sealed to the tree; 50 years of demise
She remembers all of this but her fate way afar
Hell be to her, may she weep at all her pity
When her love was un-sealed, by a strange young lady
But what a conception
Of her reincarnation
Her heart flames of ice
When many a journey awaits them, she'll watch over him
Using maiden's souls as a clever disguise
Months pass by, her appearance few
The chances in hell with him; bidding his companions adieu
Is nothing more then a sheer fantasy; a desire
Of a sorrowful destination; where the sky is never blue
So in this tree she awaits him nearing soon
Midnight, twilight, morn into noon
The stars of celestial nation, may they be their guide
To complete the sacred jewel side-by-side
This team of courageous heroes; their hearts of gold
She ponders the nature of her stolen souls
Alas they reunite; that girl in the way
The hero himself must choose to go, or stay
For this priestess, she will not fret
To crawl into hell, that hero she must get
Priestess of mischief she binds the lady to this tree
And glares at her love, with tainted mystery
This lady tied to the trunk of her bounds
Cries to the scene she lands to the ground
On her rough knees
With no look to please
She struggles the magic, to save her friend
Hoping that the lady won't take him to his end
Priestess of doubt; a kiss on his lips
His surprise, no reaction; this she didn't miss
The young lady stares unintentionally to the ground
Tears fall once more, not making a sound
She screams, she yells but yet she didn't know
Her words fell upon deaf ears
This maiden's face streaked in sorrow
And love
The ground shakes and stirs she's ready to leave
And drag him with her to rid of her grieve
With one last call of her new-love's name
He snaps out of his trance
To end this foolish game
With utter shock, she bids him well
And tells him that kiss was not of any spell
Whisked up into the sky; the man stands tall
To think of his destined; which lady claimed his love whole
The maiden is un-bound from the tree of those spirits
She tells her new love; he willing wanted to hear it
Telling of what she saw in his eyes
Was that love that was missing, before that priestess died
Not wanting to press the issue further
She heads on home
Unsure; alone
He goes to the village to tell his friends
Of what happened in the forest, from where it begins
That lady far at home, he waits for her here
And thinks those thoughts he missed out on over the years
What love is, and how you know it's true
The mystery no one can still heartily reveal
What was that feeling of a man who'd conceal
That emotion so true
But who would dare keep himself a feeling like that?
Our hero, himself, couldn't face the fact
To cherish only one of these maidens
And leave it at that
Morning after morning the maiden traveled solemnly
But making sure it was hidden from her friends with a smile
That made her feel even more guiltily
She thinks of thoughts along the lines of another
For love is the thing that keeps this triangle together
Emotions of rage, longing, and jealousy
Ranged the forest
Of two ladies we see
One of happiness, joy, and bliss
The other of darkness, rage; those ladies complete opposites
Stuck in confusion he both sure did love
Those damn rays of emotion, his companions didn't miss
To see
How this man can't choose one
And let the other be; was still a mass of mystery
Still this lady of hell still awaits
For yet, another go of lucky fate
Her love is tainted; midsummer glass
Her rival; that woman
Needed to die, and fast
Over the time, lanterns, children and glee spread the town
With the priestess's spirit still roaming around
Evil arises
Death traps await
Another past enemy plans our heroes' fates
He lurks in the shadows; eyes full of hate
Different battles take place from then on
Of the heart, mind, and body, this they prolong
It's a tough world in this era; no arguments here
Just be sure to read a book, of the love triangle's affair
Sengoku Jidai
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Ok, I didn't expect it to be 3 pages long in Microsoft Word, but that's ok.
I hope you understood what I was saying throughout the poem. It was
basically an over-view of the beginning point of InuYasha, I think you'd
know who was who, though! If not, and you want to know, e-mail or review
the story if your the least curious. I loved this poem. I hope you did too,
without any more mentions, I bid you adieu! *waves*
Much love to all,
Hirari the 9th GOMS
nice about her..yea, well. This DOESN'T mean I like the ice cube, but I
just wanted to aim my writing in a new direction. The poem takes coverage
on Kikyo first, then it skips to other situations, like.actually I don't
wanna tell you. ^_^ But It's a good poem, I had it reviewed by my Aunt (who
is an 8th teacher) already. She, of course had no idea what this was about
exactly, but she did love it! So I think you all will too, because you know
what it's talking about...I know you do! No need to review unless you liked
it. Thanks, and enjoy it for what it's worth!
---------------------}(i){ ------ ---------------
Misty Forests
In Dedication to - Natalie Castallanos
---------------------}(i){ ------ ---------------
Misty Forests
Who is this woman I see past?
This lady of smiling children; their spirits to last
A tall tree she stood, at which she still awaits
She'll wait forever, even face all fates
Herbs, lanterns, and night rounded the small town's turn
Woman of earth, watch her corpse burn
The arrow enchanted, the bow of no mercy
It races, it soars, it strikes up above
He speeds to leave all, gloating of his prize
The pain, sorrow, and betrayal glowed in his eyes
All, but his love
This encountered before she dies
And him sealed to the tree; 50 years of demise
She remembers all of this but her fate way afar
Hell be to her, may she weep at all her pity
When her love was un-sealed, by a strange young lady
But what a conception
Of her reincarnation
Her heart flames of ice
When many a journey awaits them, she'll watch over him
Using maiden's souls as a clever disguise
Months pass by, her appearance few
The chances in hell with him; bidding his companions adieu
Is nothing more then a sheer fantasy; a desire
Of a sorrowful destination; where the sky is never blue
So in this tree she awaits him nearing soon
Midnight, twilight, morn into noon
The stars of celestial nation, may they be their guide
To complete the sacred jewel side-by-side
This team of courageous heroes; their hearts of gold
She ponders the nature of her stolen souls
Alas they reunite; that girl in the way
The hero himself must choose to go, or stay
For this priestess, she will not fret
To crawl into hell, that hero she must get
Priestess of mischief she binds the lady to this tree
And glares at her love, with tainted mystery
This lady tied to the trunk of her bounds
Cries to the scene she lands to the ground
On her rough knees
With no look to please
She struggles the magic, to save her friend
Hoping that the lady won't take him to his end
Priestess of doubt; a kiss on his lips
His surprise, no reaction; this she didn't miss
The young lady stares unintentionally to the ground
Tears fall once more, not making a sound
She screams, she yells but yet she didn't know
Her words fell upon deaf ears
This maiden's face streaked in sorrow
And love
The ground shakes and stirs she's ready to leave
And drag him with her to rid of her grieve
With one last call of her new-love's name
He snaps out of his trance
To end this foolish game
With utter shock, she bids him well
And tells him that kiss was not of any spell
Whisked up into the sky; the man stands tall
To think of his destined; which lady claimed his love whole
The maiden is un-bound from the tree of those spirits
She tells her new love; he willing wanted to hear it
Telling of what she saw in his eyes
Was that love that was missing, before that priestess died
Not wanting to press the issue further
She heads on home
Unsure; alone
He goes to the village to tell his friends
Of what happened in the forest, from where it begins
That lady far at home, he waits for her here
And thinks those thoughts he missed out on over the years
What love is, and how you know it's true
The mystery no one can still heartily reveal
What was that feeling of a man who'd conceal
That emotion so true
But who would dare keep himself a feeling like that?
Our hero, himself, couldn't face the fact
To cherish only one of these maidens
And leave it at that
Morning after morning the maiden traveled solemnly
But making sure it was hidden from her friends with a smile
That made her feel even more guiltily
She thinks of thoughts along the lines of another
For love is the thing that keeps this triangle together
Emotions of rage, longing, and jealousy
Ranged the forest
Of two ladies we see
One of happiness, joy, and bliss
The other of darkness, rage; those ladies complete opposites
Stuck in confusion he both sure did love
Those damn rays of emotion, his companions didn't miss
To see
How this man can't choose one
And let the other be; was still a mass of mystery
Still this lady of hell still awaits
For yet, another go of lucky fate
Her love is tainted; midsummer glass
Her rival; that woman
Needed to die, and fast
Over the time, lanterns, children and glee spread the town
With the priestess's spirit still roaming around
Evil arises
Death traps await
Another past enemy plans our heroes' fates
He lurks in the shadows; eyes full of hate
Different battles take place from then on
Of the heart, mind, and body, this they prolong
It's a tough world in this era; no arguments here
Just be sure to read a book, of the love triangle's affair
Sengoku Jidai
---------------------}(i){ ---------------------
Ok, I didn't expect it to be 3 pages long in Microsoft Word, but that's ok.
I hope you understood what I was saying throughout the poem. It was
basically an over-view of the beginning point of InuYasha, I think you'd
know who was who, though! If not, and you want to know, e-mail or review
the story if your the least curious. I loved this poem. I hope you did too,
without any more mentions, I bid you adieu! *waves*
Much love to all,
Hirari the 9th GOMS
