*okaii finally wrote something and here it is, it may or may not go anywhere. Hopefully it will. I don't know how the rating works but if there is any change in the content, I will make sure to add a note at the top of the chapter. Yeah here it is. Enjoy. ( ^ _ ^ )*
~ Luka Autumn #
As I approached the once beautiful village of Konoha, I could smell, the still, suffocating fumes from the scattered embers of recently doused flames. I paced through streets cluttered with rubble, glass and timber of destroyed homes while Hiro remained at my side, alert while my body fell numb. The great leaf reduced to dust in all of three days. We continued down a narrow pass between two streets, and was met by a horrific image, the once welcoming cloth flags of the Ichiraku Ramen Shop now tattered, no longer welcoming but holding now, only blood stained stories of slaughtered innocence. I fell to my knees, and my vision began to blur, as a wave of nostalgias came over me, I remembered the first day I entered this village and it was so peaceful and comforting, everyone was kind. It was Ichiraku's where I first met Anzu and Ai. The thought knock me straight back to reality. Where were they, they had left with Itachi and Deidara little over a day before me, they should be here. A sudden burst of fear came through me. What if they had run into the beast, who had, single handed, brought down the leaf? A bark from Hiro shocks me from my panic, there were people close by and he could sense it. He looks to me for a command. I signalled him behind the remains of the old flower shop, and we wait….*please review, advice, tips, judgement…... [Hopefully not too harsh],
I'm working on a story for the anime/manga "Soul Eater" hoping for that soon. So yeah, bye!*
~Luka Autumn #
