Okay, this is my first ever song fic. I wasnt a hundred percent sure how to do this so . . . I did the best that I could. Please dont be harsh but please tell me how I could improve. This song is Somebody's Me by Enrique Iglesias. I was listening to this song when I was reading Kiba and Hinata fanfic and this just poped into my head. So yeah, read on and PLEASE review and tell me how I did and what I can do to get better. (Oh and the song is in bold and what Kiba's POV is italicized.)
You, do you remember me,
Hinata, do you see me,
Like I remember you?
Like how I see you?
Do you spend your life, going back in your mind to that time?
Do you ever think back to the times when I was there and Naruto wasn't?
Cause I, I walk the streets alone.
I do, when I'm all alone.
I hate being on my own,
I hate being apart from you.
And everyone can see that I really fell,
Everyone else knows how I feel,
And I'm going through hell, thinking about you with somebody else.
And know how much I hate the thought of you with Naruto.
Somebody wants you, somebody needs you.
Somebody dreams about you every single night.
Somebody can't breath, without you it's lonely.
Somebody hopes that one day you will see,
That somebody's me, that somebody's me, yeah.
How, how did we go wrong?
Why couldn't I make you see?
It was so good and now it's gone,
We could have been perfect for each other,
And I pray at night that our paths soon will cross,
And every night I wish that you will realize my feeling for you,
And what we hide isn't lost,
So I don't have to hide my love,
Cause you're always right here in my thought's.
Cause I know I love you and Naruto doesn't.
Somebody wants you, somebody needs you.
Somebody dreams about you every single night.
Somebody can't breath, without you it's lonely.
Somebody hopes that one day you will see,
That somebody's me, yeah.
You will always be in my life even if I'm not in your life,
I will always love you, even if you don't love me,
Cause you're in my memory.
Cause I can never forget the love I feel for you.
You, will you remember me?
But will you, will you love me back?
And before you set me free, oh, listen please.
And before you say anything, listen please.
Somebody wants you, somebody needs you.
Somebody dreams about you every single night.
Somebody can't breath, without you it's lonely.
Somebody hopes that one day you will see,
Somebody's me, somebody's me,
That somebody's me, that somebody's me, oh, yeah.
"K-Kiba-Kun . . ."
"I love you Hinata."
"I l-love you t-too Kiba-Kun."
