Hey guys! I'm back with a new fic. All of my other stories are on hiatus, due to lack of reviews. I know it sucks, but getting 16 emails from fanfiction and only 2 of them are reviews? That sucks. That's right, in one day I got 14 emails about different people adding the same story to alert. Only 2 out of those 14 took the time to leave a review. Anyway, sorry about the rant, it just really ticks me off. Either way, I hope people will actually review this story. This is my first Gundam 00 fic. From what I've seen so far, Allelujah is my favourite character hands down. This is gonna be another brothers fic (why do I seem to do these a lot?) with Hallelujah (the darker persona if you will) as the older brother and Allelujah (the gentler personality) as the younger. Without further ado, I bring you Gundam Kyodai. I know the title isn't very imaginative, but I already have another fic called Kyodai so I can't use that. Forgive me. Also, I haven't really decided on exact ages for the two, so let's just say that they're around 10 years old, sorry for it being so vague. I'll say they're 10 in this, if I change it later then I will, sorry.

-Saph


The birds were chirping, the sky was blue, and the gentle wind lightly caressed the green grass. It was the picture of peace. But peace is always disrupted. Out of the blue the sound of yelling is heard.

"HURRY UP ALLE!" A boy's voice yells. He slows his running for a second to look over his shoulder at his slow, younger brother. He has a pretty strong build for a 10 year old. His black/green hair covers the left side of his face so that one golden eye is visible.

"Don't run so fast, Halle." The smaller, and younger, of the twins pants as he catches up to his older brother. He stops and bends over, hands on his knees as he catches his breath. He looks pretty much the same as his older brother, with a slightly smaller build and the side his hair covers as the only major differences. However, if one looked closely enough they would see that the eye that was showing on the smaller one was a grey/blue.

Allelujah stayed like that for a moment, not realizing until it was too late that his brother had a cruel prank in store for him. He looked up just in time to see a hand right in front of him. To be more exact, two fingers posed to flick him.

"OW!" He cried as his brother flicked him on the forehead. "What was that for, Halle?!" he retorted, mad.

"For you being so slow." Hallelujah stated as-a-matter-of-factly. "Come on!" He called, bending over. "Get on my back." He stated. Although he was mean most of the time, Hallelujah really did care about his younger brother, as weak as he may be.

"What? No!" Alle cried, backing away. Knowing Halle, this was probably a prank, as soon as he got on Halle would either throw him off, or run so fast it would make him sick. Besides, Halle had always pounded the meaning of 'being a man' into him since they could walk. He wasn't going to show weakness in front of him and give him another way to humiliate him.

"Just get on. I won't do anything." Halle stated. When he didn't feel his younger brother he sighed. "Look, we can do this one of two ways. One, you don't get on and die from another asthma attack and we both get yelled at by mom; or you get on my back and we get home before dinner, safe and sound." After this he felt the light weight of his younger brother on his back. "Good. Looks like you're not as dumb as I thought you were." He added to change the mood. Normally he wouldn't do this; he would just let his brother pant his way back home. But today he noticed that Alle had a fever that had only escalated throughout the day, and the fact that he wouldn't admit he should have brought his medicine. Stupid Alle. He thought as he walked home.

To be continued...

Will the brothers make it home on time? Will Alle get sick? Will Halle be mean and throw his little brother off? Find out, but only if you review!!!


So, what do you think? Please leave a review; if I get enough and am happy with it then I'll upload the next chapter. I have a great plan for this story, and I really, really, really want to share it. But I can only do so if I get reviews. Setting this to story alert or author alert is fine if you want to, just as long as a review comes with it. It doesn't matter if it's just a one word review like 'cute' or something short like 'Update soon.' As long as I get reviews, I'll be happy enough to continue. Thank you for reading this far and I look forward to seeing some reviews.

-Saph