Unacceptable?
This is my very first fic, so sorry if its complete rubbish, but please try and give me constructive criticism.
Summary: Harry learns a secret about himself, something that could tear his life apart, and stitch it back again, slight AU, might be OOC Yaoi later, main pairing HP/DM.
As Harry walked out of the gryffindor common room, towards potions, he noticed Crabbe and Goyle sniggering in a corner, probably one of malfoy's new pranks Harry thought, recently, malfoy had been playing more and more tricks on the gryffindors, quite like a slytherin version of Fred and George.
Harry shuddered who knows what he'll be up to he just hoped his friends and him would be left alone.
Harry entered the potions room, and sat down. Hermione and Ron sitting either side of him.
"Right then" Severus Snape said in his droning voice "In order to keep you all focussed on Potions, and not anything else, I have decided to pair you up with someone else in this classroom, which will be done randomly.
He preceded to use his wand to write everyone's names on the board, then moved them around, which ended up being paired.
"NO!" Ron Hermione and Harry all shouted, though they were not the only ones.
"Silence!" Snape shouted. "these are your pairs, move so you are sitting next to your partner now.
"Great" Hermione whispered. "I'm stuck with that COW Parkinson"
"well I'm not much luckier" Ron replied "I'm stuck with Zabini"
"Well I've got it worst, I'm stuck with the snake lord himself" Harry groaned inwardly Why does this always happen to me.
"Hello, Potter." Malfoy snarled.
"Malfoy" Harry replied in equal dislike.
"Today you will be making a simple Healing Draught." Snape droned. "you will find the instructions" he continued with a flick of his wand "on the board."
Harry got to work, carefully slicing the boomslang skin, as Malfoy began to crush newts eyeballs and toads legs into a paste. They worked quickly, but efficiently, getting the work done well, Better than Hermione maybe even. Harry thought, This may work out yet.
Thanks everyone, sorry its soo short, let me know what I'm doing wrong (cos I almost definitely am) and let me know how to improve it. Ill update it soon, but a few reviews would be appreciated so I know how its being received, that's all =D
-Belgarion489-
