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~Since That Day~
"I'm sorry." Shikamaru said before stabbing the kunai through Temari's heart.
Blood started to spill from Temari's mouth. Temari's chest splattered out blood and soiled Shikamaru's kunai. Temari fall onto Shikamaru who was wearing an anbu mask. Temari looked up at Shikamaru.
"I-It's okay. B-but pl-please let m-me se-see your face f-for t-the last time." She stuttered placing her right hand on his mask.
Shikamaru thought for a second then he nodded, let her removed his mask, revealed his face for the first time since that day -when they were forced to do this-.
When she removed his mask, a tears dropped onto Temari's right hand which make her looked up at his –finally without mask- face. He was crying, tears dropping from his eyes without him noticing. Her right hand touched his wet cheek before wiping the tears away. Temari smiled.
"Y-you re-really is a crybaby. Y-you haven't ch-changed Shika. Still like before, still like that day." Temari said while coughing out blood.
Temari looked up at him once again and gave him the last smile she could gave while whispering the words 'i-I love you la-lazy cry b-baby' beside Shikamaru's left ears.
Then she put his mask back to his face. Her right hand fall on to his back, eyes closed, the smile remained on her face while blood flowed down her mouth on to his left shoulder.
Shikamaru cried. Let his feeling out for the first time since that day -when they were forced to do this-.
Shikamaru yelled at himself, yelled at the air, yelled at the sky, yelled at the clouds, yelled at the died body in front of him.
He had completely closed his feeling since that day -when they were forced to do this-.
But now, he wanted to let it out and filled him. Filled him with sadness, sorrow and misery to torture himself.
He sobbed quietly. Looking at Temari's pale face. He wipe the blood off from her beautiful face. He took her left hand and kiss her fingertips. When he kissed her ring fingertips, he saw the ring. He looked at it then took it out. He cut Temari's sash in to a long and slim string. The ring was putted in to the string. He tied it along his neck, set it as a necklace.
He got up while carrying Temari's corpse with a prince style. "I won't forget that day."
