HI!! Everybody, I hope that you enjoy my new fic, I don't think that my English is good enough, please if I write something wrong, tell me, now the moment that everybody are waiting for, my fic!!!!
Musa and Riven were talking, a week ago, about send their son to a vacation camp on the summer, now they are in the car with the little Peter, Riven stop on a gas station and Musa take Peter to the bathroom. Musa and Peter stay in the bathroom thirty minutes, one hour, one hour and a half and Riven is starting to get worry, the cell phone of Riven starting to ring and a man talk to him something that makes Riven get more worry than after.
-Hey stupid, we have your wife and your son, you have to do all the things that we gone to say you-Said a voice on the phone.
-Please don't touch them!-Shout Riven.
-If you're a good guy with us, we don't make anything
-What do you want?
-First $2,000,000, then you sends to us, we gone say you more, we go to call you tomorrow to give you a place to left the money, OK?
-But…I don't have that money
-We're sorry but if you don't have that money you're wife and you're kid gone pass to a better life, do you understand what I mean?
-Yes, can I hear their voice?
-Of course, hey you! Yore husband is in the phone-Said the guy and put Musa on the phone, they have arms and said Musa to talk a little with Riven but she can't say the place that they were.
-Hi
-Musa? My Darleen are you OK?
-Yes, please send the money
-Is Peter OK?
-Yes, Riven I love you I have to go bye
-I love you too
-You listen, now go to the money
-I said you that I don't have this money
-You have all this day to take the money and tomorrow you have it to give us.
Riven stay thinking on the car, what he goes to do? First, he call to the father of Musa and said that Musa and he take a little vacations and don't gone to return before a week or more, second, he drive to a little town, he go to the police office and they help him. They start to search the guys, but nothing, the police and Riven are very worry and Riven is scarier than worry. What he gone to do now?
The day is over and Riven's phone start to ring.
-The address is…
-I don't have the money
-What?
-I don't have the money
-I hear you! Why? I was a good man with you but is over, listen what you make me do, hey lady! Musa it is your name no? I have notice for you, your stupid husband doesn't give us the money and now you gone to pay by that-The sound is horrible only Musa shouting and the man knocking her.
-Please Stop!
-No you don't want to hear us now we make you the same
-Please!-Said Riven and start to cry
-Bye
A very short first chapter, but, I don't have a lot of ideas today so I hope the next is better, please if you don't understand or you think that my English is like a kinder garden girl please tell me I need to know to learn about my mistakes bye!!
