AN:Hey! This is my first ever fan fiction even though I read alot. I'm practically a baby author so I need guidance and support. Flames are kinda' sorta' asked for too. PLEASE, I'M BEGGING!! Review so I know what I need to do to become better.
Well, enough of 'I'm a baby author' ramble...ON WITH THE CHAPTER!!!...i think...
Disclaimer:DO I FREAKIN' LOOK LIKE STEPHENIE MEYER?!?!?!?!?! I thought so...
BPOV
"You don't...want...me?"
"No." That one word shot through the air like a gun shot. That one world sent my world crashing down around me. That one word was the last thing he said before he disappeared.
Desperately I tried to follow him, though I knew in my cold heart it was useless...That I was useless. They left me. They all left and they aren't coming back. I ran as fast as I could, tripping often and branches and thorns cutting my skin but not able to feel the pain. I felt nothing. My heart was shatterd then frozen, therefor not being able to be put back together. It felt like as time went on - though I have no idea how much - the shards of my heart started to attack my lungs. My vision blurred and the last thin I was aware of was my body falling.
"Bella darling," a harsh voice called out. "Bella, babe, wake up time!" I felt a stinging on my left cheek break through the darkness. I slowly opened my eyes as far as I could with the weight that felt like was on them. I could vaguely see the person now.
"Oh joy, you're up!"
Victoria.
AN: Like I said before PLEASE!!!!! Sorry it's so short! I just needed a base and to see if any veterans would give a newbie advice...Please review! I'll even draw you a map, how's that?
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