Alpha and Omega: Debt paid with Blood

Alright first story Plz use creative critisizm

The Wind Crackled as it Passed throught the trees, Sending warm air into the undergrowth and into the bushes. A lone bull grazed below, it chewed on the wild grass it's long legs like stone pillars his antlers covered in velvet and the scratches of old fights lay visible.

The wind shifted , as the Old bull cocked his head releasing a loud snort. Admist the bush a pair of Glowing eyes focused on the moose, to the eyes their was nothing else just it's prey. the eyes took note of every breath , every movement, every blink of the bull.

The bull was old but it was not frail, it turned it's head to glance at the bush and the field of tall wild grass.

Time seemed to stop as the Moose locked eyes with the Glowing eyes. There was a flash, the bull turned it's horns, but any defense was forseen. Their was a yell then a slash of fur and the bull staggered, it thrashed out in a blood rage, not aiming just lashing about in its final fight for life. After each movement it slowed. It grew colder the bull was as if in a fog then it let out its death scream and collapsed sending the birds in the trees scattering. The wolf stepped into the light and studied he's work. He cleaned the blood from his mouth and turned He's head up and signaled the others. The oldest stepped near him and spoke "Nice kill you'll make her proud"

The old wolf spoke With words of stone

"I'am almost good enough" Thought Humphrey "almost'' It had been a winter since they last saw eachother the thought of her made him dizzy, her golden fur always soft , and the scent of flowers that were always with her.

He flashed back to the conversation 3 months prior . " I am not good enough" He said finnaly after their short howl. " what do you mean'' she hummed back. '' kate if you know want ...puppies " he shook from his mouth I need to be strong and fast and and a Alpha" He tried to say proudly "humphrey i like you the way you are" she mused . "No Kate I need to be Strong for the Pack and for you"