She looked down with golden, bewildered, catatonic eyes.
The small, blood speckled lips hanging agape.
Oh, why? She thought in confused pain. Why did her insides quiver and flip so? Why her, when the one that should have been experiencing this horrid feeling had been so deserving of it? Oh, that was right. The other woman had her entire digestive track practically hanging out of her lower back!
A thick, hot wave of pain and confusion washed over her pajama-clad form as it lay entangled in a mass of hair(hers and 'kaa-san's), blood('kaa-san's and hers also), and human organs(only okaa-san's). Sakura shifted and choked back a scream at the pain. A gleaming, blood-soaked kitchen knife was protruding out the back of her long-sleeved pajama top, right through the sternum. her mother must have felt the same sensation of a foreign object ripping through her, but in the stomach.
"Ssh, ssh." she hushed. "It's alright baby, Mommy's here, Mommy's here. Oh Sakura, my darling, my tenshi-baby…" her voice started to crack in a drunken state of profound fear and anguish. " Fucking Kami, what have I done?!" she whispered hoarsely. "Momma?" Sakura asked surprised. "Why were you so mad? Did I do something?" she was starting to hiccup back tears as blood dripped from the corners of her mouth. "Fuck no, baby!" her 'kaa-san replied, "I could never be mad at that god-given face of yours. Even if I was blind, you hear?!" she tried to crack a broken smile as she replied with faithful conviction. "Mommy, Momma?!" Sakura whispered, panic evident in her voice. "Ssh, ssh. Hush now, Mommy loves you more than anything in the world,
understand?" Sakura nodded with a panicked frown, eyes tearing. "I love you, Oba-san Sango loves you, Otooji-san Miroku loves you. Daddy loved you more than the air we're breathing, more than money, more than his guitars, more than his motorcycle, hell, tenshi, I think he loved you more than me sometimes!" Kagome gave a laugh that Sakura couldn't decide whether it was bitter or humorous.
And then she died.
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Taisho-Higurashi Kagome left the world of the living at the young age of 24. She was the beloved little sister of Higurashi Miroku, the cherished and deeply beloved wife of the late Taisho Inuyasha. Head priestess of the Shikon no Tama Shrine. Loving and revered as a powerful kunoichi, part of konohagakure's legendary
ru-ki hachi wakedori she will be grieved greatly, missed immensely,and loved forever.
but this is not her story.(2) this is a story about a little girl. no, no, that isn't right. you see, this is not just any story, and this
wasn't just any little girl. this is the story of a girl who(2) assumed an identity, cast on a mask, and treaded into the world of
secrets, and the danger of keeping them.
So, what so you guys think? i think it was pretty good for a first timer. here's a little update though;
underlined-name of a place
bold,underlined,&italics-certain group(i.e. rookie nine, akatsuki,etc;)
bold-jutsu
- Okay, also, I WILL be using AMJAP(3) in my stories to make them...cooler. As such, I will be translating for all the bakas(4) out there that only watch the english dub of the anime. Also, I may use a quote in my writing and won't cite it rite there ('cuz it'll disrupt the flow of the story), so I'm going to do it down here with the translations
(1) this is the group that Shikato, Kagome, Tsume, Hizashi&Hiashi ,and Inuyasha were apart of. it literally transltes to "the rookie eighth division"... (don't you think there's another reason it's called the rookie nine? weren't mommy and daddy legends too?)
(2)This is from The little girl who was forgotten by absolutely everyone.(even the postman) by Ms. Katy Towell. movies!
thanx for reading the prologue of "Let Me Show You Just What I'm Made Of".
now, i'm not a newbie that writes just for reveiws. i want creative criticism!!!!!!! i want to write a story you like, but i can't do that if you
don't reveiw and TELL ME!!!!!
(2)bakas-idiots
(3)AMJAP-as much japanese as possible
