Hello.
This is my first fanfic. English is not my Language so please forgive me when I make mistakes.
I hope you like it.
Note: the underlined words or pharases are those expressions of which I'm not sure ...so at the end of chapter, I write the italian word. If someone knows how translate better can write me and I'm going to correct.
Thorin never thought he would have seen again Kili.
He had tried to avoid thinking about him since the day he had fled from home. It was too painful! Thorin hated himself for this, it was his biggest regret.
Since that day, every night, he saw him in his dreams, he saw him run away again, he saw his little eyes fill whit tears and he saw him disappear forever from his life...again and again…as if it were a punishment.
That day of many years ago he had shouted against his nephew but he was terribly wrong, he knowed. He didn't want to shouted those words, but he it did and Kili is disappeared before he could ask pardon.
- A child so small would never have survived a such winter- he repeated every day at himself - there wasn't way- but every time that Fili proposed a vain journey in search to his brother, Thorin accepted immediately. That it did for convince himself of Kili's death or for clean his consciousness, it's not very important for this story.
Him, his nephew, Dwalin, Balin,Oin, Gloin and Bofur were, infact, parties some week before, after that some merchants had signaled the presence of a young dwarf that resembled vaguely the lost prince. It wasn't the fist time and our dwarfs was very skeptics that he is really Kili; all except Fili who continued to hope.
They arrived, therefore, in a forest far enough by Ered Luin for to do of a company of dwarfs a important news. The people in the village spoke "What they do here?" "They are bandits!" "We must hide our jewelry!" ...but they didn't listen them and they continued for their road.
Arrived to the forest, they immediately noticed how this was dark. The big lush trees and the carpet of leaves made her truly mystical.
Although Thorin was the 'ex-king', this time was Fili that was in front all dwarfs of the company, and he galloped here and there watching everything carefully.
All know how Fili loved Kili when they were children, and all know how Fili suffered the disappearance of his brother; so all know too how the prince was angry with his uncle (although he tried to hide it).
"We will camp here!" announced Thorin. "Dwalin, you and Fili will go at search food; I, Oin and Gloin will set up the camp while Bifur will prepare needed for dinner"
Fili listened in silence, nodding his head he walked to the depths of the forest following by Dwalin. Fili watched around to search some home or building...something that indicate the presence of someone but nothing. Dwalin saw Fili's nervousness and he tried to talked with him but the prince blond don't listened him.
"The rabbits not jump so high maybe you should to search further down!" he teased. Fili smiled but didn't speak.
"I know that you all think that Kili is died! But he isn't! I know! He is live Dwalin...he must be..." he confessed.
"Has been a long time lad, maybe...you should prepare at the idea that him is..."
"never!" he snapped violently.
Dwalin wanted to relicate when a knife was bet at Fili's throat from behind.
"Who are you? And what do you do in my forest?"
Were, infact, parties = erano, infatti, partiti
It's the first chapter…how does it look?
If you write me my errors I'm going to correct it.
Bye bye. Thank for now.
