CHAPTER ONE
E L James wrote the story of Fifty Shades of Grey - which I fell in love with it and thought I would write a little. This story is in Kate's point of view. I am truly sorry if there are any errors. Some one you might recognize it from my previous story but I felt that it wasn't the way I wanted the story to go. To help with the story the italized sentences are thoughts of Kate. Hope everyone likes it. :)
I lay my pencil down on my desk... I am finally done with college so freaking glad that is over with. I look around the class room and spot my best friend Ana smiling at me and I shoot her a thumbs up and turn to look out the window. Oh how we are gunna party tonight!
Later that night at the bar...
I am sitting at the table next to the dance floor along with one of my friends Levi (my usual photograpgher for the school newspaper). "Hmmm... I wonder where Ana and Jose are at?" I ask Levi, "Oh well I just wanna have fun tonight, you down Levi?" "Yeah of course, we always have fun Kate," I smile at Levi and turn to the door where I get a glance at a very attractive guy I smile at him and turn back to Levi smiling pretending that I have been paying attention to everything he just said and take a drink from my beer. "Hey, would you like to dance?" I turn around thinking it must be one of the guys from school but see the attractive guy that was standing at the door earlier "umm... yeah why not!" I tell him and stand up and get a last drink of the beer before noticing Levi chugging his bottle of Coors. Oh Levi, don't sweat it hun!
We dance for about two songs and I tell him I am getting thirsty, he just smiles and grabs my hand and pulls me towards the bar. Why am I letting him hold my hand? We get to the bar and he wraps his arm around my waist "What would you like?" he whisphers in my ear "I'll take a beer... any kind" I smile up at him. "Two coors in bottles, please" he says to the bartender. I start look around to see if I can see Ana or Jose but no sign of either one Gah, I hope Ana is okay! "So tell me a little bit about you Kate?" I look up to this mystery guy and look at him confused as hell. He just keeps looking giving nothing away, so I get out of his hold and stand right in front of him "Well my name is Kate, what's yours?" I say with a little bit more attitude then I would like. He starts to laugh and leans in to my ear "Elliot... Elliot Grey." When he pulls away I notice the bartender with our beers and reach for mine and take a drink. Elliot Grey... how does he know me? He hands the dude some money and holds my hand again and pulls me towards the table where I had been sitting at. We walk up to the table and I smile at Levi and take a seat; he pulls the chair closer to me and sits down. "Christian told me a bit about you" he states, I look up at him and roll my eyes. "Lets dance again" I say getting up and smiling at him.
After a while of dancing Elliot whispers in my ear "You're a great dancer, Kate." I turn towards him and notice a huge smile on his face. "I can say the same about you Grey" I say turning back around and continue to dance. I am not really sure how long we have been dancing but I notice Christian and Ana in front of us. Hmmm... Ana says she can't dance but look at her with him. As we continue to dance Christian leans in to say something to Elliot. After their small conversation Elliot whispers in my ear "Ana is gunna catch a ride with my brother, I can take you home" I smile like a child being given candy and wave bye to Ana and Christian. After they walk away I turn to Elliot and wrap my arms around his neck. Yes Mr. Grey, you can take me home... We dance for another song and then head to the table to sit down. When we get there I don't see Levi or Jose, actually remembering now I haven't seen Jose for a while. "Wanna go grab a bite to eat?" I look at Elliot forgetting about what I was thinking "Hun, it's like one o'clock in the morning, are you sure?" He laughs at little and looks at his watch "It's almost three and yeah come on there is an IHOP around here." He stands and holds out his hand out, I smile and take it.
We walk outside still holding hands "Umm... did you drive? Because I rode with Christian and he left me," I chuckle a little and say "Yeah, I got your back hun." We walk towards my car just chatting a little about Christian and Ana. I hand him my keys when we get to my car and make my way to the passanger side. He smiles and unlocks it. We drive about two blocks and get to the resturant. He walks around and opens the door for me and we head inside. After we are seated in a booth, we begin to talk about everyday life. He tells me that he owns his own construction company in Seattle and has a small side business (things I already know because of my investigation on his brother but I like that he tells me about himself). "How about you tell me about yourself?" he askes me. "Well, I am about to graduate and hope to soon move to Seattle to start working on my career as a journalist, I love my family and shopping and having good time" I smile and reach for my chocolate milk and take a sip. After midnight breakfast, we head to the apartment except this time I drive since he doesn't know where I live.
We pull up out side of the apartment and I quickly get out to open the door for him, as he steps out of the vehicle he laughs "Cute!" he says with the same big smile I saw earlier this evening. I take his hand and walk up to the door step and pull the keys out of my pocket and unlock the door. Once inside, I place my keys on the bowl next to the door and start conversation "So this is my place, well mine and Ana's place." "Nice place" he says taking a seat on the couch. "Would you like something to drink?" I ask before taking a seat next to him, "Nah I am good." We start talking a little more about our lives, I start feeling a lot more comfortable around him. A little by little I keep scooting closer to him and the next thing I know my legs are comfortably lying over his with his hands rubbing my legs. Thank God I shaved my legs this morning! I begin to laugh at one of his jokes and he leans in and plants a kiss on my lips. I lean back a little and notice a smile playing at his lips and I begin to kiss him, before we both know it I am straddling him on the couch. 'Where's the bedroom?" he says breathing heavily "Down the hall second door to the right" I tell him. He gets up from the couch still holding me and walks towards the room, while I am just staring into his amazing blue eyes.
He pushes the door open and I kiss him and as he tries to kiss back I bite his lip - he smiles and lays me on my bed. I keep looking into his eyes and finally decide to let go of his lips. He starts to kiss me again and continues on to my neck as i am working on getting his pants off. Once his pants come off I kick them on to the floor and pull his shirt off. He begins to kiss my stomach and unbuckling my pants, he slowly pulls them down then pulls down my panties and slips my shirt over my head. "Mr. Grey I do believe you are over dressed for the occasion!" I say to him "Well seems like you are correct Ms. Kavanagh," he takes off his boxers and throws them on the floor with the rest of his clothes but picks up his pants and take out a condom out of the pocket. I can't seem to take my eyes off of him though - he is big! He slowly leans towards me and kisses me, I feel him at my entrance and I wrap my arms around his neck - he slowly moves in and out of me "Faster, Elliot" I say breathing hard. He starts to move and I mean really move. I can feel myself getting closer but he stops and turns me over so that my ass is in the air facing him - he gives me a small slap on my ass and slams into me "SHIT!" I yell out but he doesn't stop he keeps going harder and harder. "Elliot!" I yell while I come to an orgasm - he slams into me one last time and I hear "FUCK."
We lay on my bed just letting our breathing calm. After a bit of silence and a yawn from my part Elliot askes "Do you mind if I stay the night?" I look up and see a somewhat confused Elliot, I am really not sure why he would be confused or nervous but I lean in for a kiss and say please. Elliot starts asking questions about Ana and her previous relationships and I get a weird gut feeling. I try to avoid the subject but he continues to ask - I wrap my blanket around me and get up from the bed "Look, if you are interested in Ana more then me go ask her all this shit yourself." I walk out of the room and head to the kitchen hoping he gets the hint to take a hike. I turn around noticing that he is in my kitchen only wearing pants Gah, Kate quit looking at his torso. "You can leave, Elliot" I tell him looking directly into his eyes. "Kate, I think you misunderstood my curiosity, I was asking about your friend because she is with my little brother at this moment - well that is if he didn't chicken out." I stay quiet just staring at him and the more I keep staring the more I notice that he is a little wounded from what I said to him. "I am just curious about them two, well mostly of what is going on in between them" he says running his hands through his hair. I take a step closer to him but he retreats back to the bedroom without another word. I follow him to the room and notice him picking up his shirt "Elliot, please don't go - all the questions about her... well I just thought you were referring to something else." I sit down on the edge of my bed why do I care that I hurt his feelings... he is just another guy... I look up and see him standing in front of me "Kate, if I really wanted Ana I wouldn't have gone after you tonight," he leans down and plants a kiss on my lips. I wrap my arms around him and we sit there for a minute or two just hugging each other. "C'mon lets get to bed it's pretty early" I smile at what he says and lay down next to him. "Good night Elliot" I tell him before closing my eyes.
And that's chapter one... i hope everyone likes it. Please feel free to let me know if I should really continue or just give the story a boot. :)
