1AN- okokokokok im soooooooooooooo sorry. I faced two types of writers block, the original and my version "Lazy writers block"..LOL..I was kinda stuck on how I ended the first chappie so I redid it. Its still almost the same as the original just a little change. Also thank you SO MUCH for the reviews..it was inspiration to continue 3 much luv ..lol Speaking of reviews..someone suggested to me to write this way so thank you also.. it is kinda easier..im writing more..LOL so I wont hold you up any longer. Here is the redid chapter of How To Lose A JEDI In 10 Days!!!!!
Disclaimer- If I created star wars, do u think Padme would've died and Anakin become Vader..well I probably would've made him suitless Vader for a little while because he is kinda sexy when mad...LOL im just an admiring fan
How to lose a JEDI in 10 days
Anakin is the most sought out JEDI in the galaxy. Every female who sees him or knows him wants him. All the males look up to him. He loves all the attention given to him. Anakin being so arrogant and self praised takes on a bet that will change his life for the better...even worst
Coruscant
Anakin parks his speeder right in front of the temple. Admiring his new precious toy. He high fives the guards at the doors Anakin walks threw the temple as if he owns it. Females who are in deep conversations stop to look in his direction to admire him, giggle amongst themselves then turn away blushing. Anakin loves this to no end.
"Good morning ladies".
Anakin tells them. He gives them his sexiest trademark smile.
"Good morning Anakin ".they all say in unison.
Anakin feels them staring at his rear as he walks off.
"Force I want him".replies Keira.
All the girls look at her with a dumb expression as if to say who doesn't.
."Take a number." Aayla says.
They all laugh ."In time..he will be mine"says Keira as she continues staring at his disappearing figure.
He walks into the sparring him to find obi wan and a few of his JEDI friends. Most of them like him others hate him. They are in a deep conversation when he walks up to them
" Well Well...look who's finally decided to walked in"
Anakin smiles
"Mr too sexy to be early" says his friend Ferus
"Well good morning to you to Mr wishing you was as sexy as Mr too sexy"
Anakin smiles even more as Ferus rolls his eyes.
Obi wan stands up and ignites his light saber
"Well now that you have decided to come, lets get busy."
They do a 3 man fight. Basically survival of the strongest. The fight goes on for hours. Anakin has his top off when a few female JEDI walk in. Anakin senses them and uses this to his advantage. Obi wan senses what his intentions are
"Oh boy here we go" he says
Anakin starts doing more aggressive and flexible body moves. Knowing that he has the attention of all the females now and the envious attention of the ones who hate him. When he is finally done performing he looks at Obi wan and ferus' knowing expression.
Anakin shrugs at them "come on guys...gotta keep my rep up float." Smiles mischievously
"well stop thinking of your rep, but your life" replies ferus
He lunges at anakin who blocks him easily. While the two are getting in a 1 on 1 battle, obi wan decides to make a move by jump kicking the both of them to the ground
"Hey that's not fair..." Anakin looks at him
"Yeah..we weren't paying attention Kenobi"
Obiwan fixes his tunic and shrugs
"well young ones...its all about paying attention..right anakin"
Anakin doesn't even here obi wan speak since he is to busy noticing his fanclub in the corner. The girls look at him across the room and giggles amongst themselves. He throws them one of his sexy trademark smiles and watches with triumph as they all blush. He smiles to himself. Obi wan realizes that anakin is in his too sexy mode and waves his hand in his face.
"Hello..is the unflirtatacious for a minute Anakin in there" He replies
Anakin doesn't take his eyes off his fans and just nods his head
"Yeah..gotcha"he says.
Obiwan and Ferus roll their eyes as Anakin continues his facial flirting. After 5 minutes of waiting for the show to stop they decide to go to lunch
"Hey anakin were going over to Dex's ..you comi-"
Ferus stops speaking since anakin is not where he was before, but was already making his way over to his fans. (Unbelievable) He says to himself.
He shouts to him
"Anakin .. Anakin ...ANAKIN" He yells very loud
Anakin who's getting the sweat off his chest wiped with a towel by one of the girls finally looks towards him
"What..as you can see I'm BUSY" He yells back.. "Where going to Dex's you coming or what" he yells back. "I'll meet you guys there".
Anakin looks back at the girls and smiles
"Forgive me..he was dropped as a youngling..no manners at all" They laugh at him "Ladies I was wondering..im a little worried that I might get mugged on my way back to my room..would you all do me the honor of walking with me...I feel that if the culprit was to see 4 beautiful ladies they would forget what they had to do"
They laugh and agree to walk with him. Anakin wraps his arms around them. Two on each side. As they walk he looks back over at ferus and obiwan who are looking at him shaking their heads. Anakin Winks and puts a thumbs up sign. As they watch the five disappearing figures Ferus looks at obiwan.
"What's wrong with you" asks obi wan
Ferus shakes his head. "I should've had you as my master" He replies
Obiwan smiles and shakes his head. He puts his arm on Ferus' shoulder
"Believe me..one hormonal cocky JEDI is enough for the order" he replies
Anakin and the girls are walking towards his apartment in the temple. He is telling them stories of his adventures with Obiwan and Ferus. Most of them he fabricated to his liking.
"...so then obiwan and ferus fall into the nest of gundarks, and me being the good friend that I'am, jumped in and saved them for the thousandth time. Some Jedi they are huh?"
They laugh along with him as they reach his door. He turns around to them.
"Thank you ladies so much for walking me. I feel so much safe now knowing that 4 beautiful angels walked me. I guess I was right about those culprits"."Your welcome Anakin" they reply in unison.
They blush and laugh as he kisses each of their cheeks. Anakin walks in and winks at them as he closes the door. He leans against it, listening and waiting for the usual reaction he gets.
"Oh force we touched Anakin Skywalker"the first girl says."He called us angels" the other replies."He is so sexy"the other puts in.
Anakin smiles as he listens to their conversation as they leave. He throws his tunic at c3po's head which causes him to turn on.
"Oh hello Master Anakin...was your training well" he asks. Anakin looks at himself in the mirror as he flexes his muscles and wiggles his eyebrows."Hello 3po..it was..rewarding" he responds. Anakin continues his mirror show then smiles to himself.
"Hmm..I guess I am sexy huh" he says to himself then walks to the fresher.
3po who was still in the background looks around the room then looks in front of the mirror as if he is looking for someone.
"hello..the person speaking to master Ani" he stands up straight.
"Oh they must of left...or master ani has gone insane..I hope master Ani knows he did not design me to understand mental problems" He waddles off.
AN-well there it is..the redid first chappie. I tried to make anakin seem a little more cocky so I hoped it worked..only your reviews will tell me(HINT HINT). The next chap will most likely be up by tonight..if not by Monday.
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