Disclaimer: Fisrt off I want to thank the reviewers! You love me you rally love me! Next I wanna say that my stupid horrbile dumb a** computer didn't save this file the first time....after an hour of typing and a perfect chapter, a love scene, the next step after chapter one , this computer did NOT SAVE MY story. **ryoame breathes heavily** I almost fainted looking for the story and not finding it. I ....don't know what to say except that I'm sorry,here is the RE-WRITTEN version of the ORIGINAL chapter(don't expect it to be as good as the one my computer didn't save!!!!!!!!)Read please and soothe me with nice reviews after you do !!!!**ryoame mutters curse words about computers**



Love of a lost one(I changed the title cause it sucked before)
Chapter 2
(Lost Soul and mended heart)


Kiyan looked at Shin with eyes full of tears. "I did it because I hated life! I hate this world,it's nothing like yours." Kiyan stood up and leaned against the stone wall. "I was homeless long before now. It all started because my mother died of cancer and my father abused me. When I was about 15 I got tired of being beat on and ran away from home. Since then I've fended for myself and survived on my own." Kiyan sighed deeply and more tears came.
"Well...one day,I was scrounging for cans to redeem to make money for food, I got hit over the head and robbed of the little cash I had. I woke up face-down in a gutter. I was cold and starving." Shin was horrified to find out that people on this peaceful seeming earth could go through so much. "I went back to the homeless people's alley where I lived and was stopped by a gangs of guys who wanted money for living in "their alley". They searched me and found I had none so they raped me!" The look in Kiyan's eyes let Shin know that she was still hurting from all of this.

"After that I woke up every day wishing I were dead. It never happened and sometimes things were worse. I hated life so much that I decided to end it." Kiyan turned to Shin. "And now...I can't even escape the horrible memories of my life. I'm stuck here on earth and reminded every day of how bad things really are." Kiyan ran outside and(Kiyan is a spirit so she can fly)flew upward. Shin chased after her.

Thunder boomed and lightning flashed. The sky illuminated and the rain poured down harder.
"Kiyan! Wait! Why are you running away?" Kiyan flew faster. Shin stopped right in front of her. "Kiyan stop! Please." He yelled over the storm. Kiyan looked down and laughed a short maniacle giggle. "Why? I'll be here forever." Kiyan said sadly. Shin looked at her. Rain was dripping down both of their faces. Kiyan's emerald green eyes stared into Shin's pitch black one's and she knew the answer.
"I love you Kiyan." Shin said taking her hands. Kiyan replied. "I love you too but I'm a spirit and you're the living. I shouldn't love you." Kiyan looked down. Nodding slowly Shin told her, "That doesn't matter. We love each other." Kiyan hugged him tightly and they decended back onto the ground.

"Do you want to be human again?" Shin asked. "More than anything I'd give for a second chance."
Kiyan replied looking up at the sky. "I think I know a way. It's dangerous and might not work though. In order for it to work, you have to want life back, trust everything I say and believe me. You can be human once again. It will work if you try." Shin explianed. "Please, come with me." "Yes." Kiyan agreed. They went off together to find a way to bring Kiyan back to life.




OOps I think I cliffhanged ya! **ryoame giggles** No! don't come near me with that ax! **angry readers chase her around a table wich she ducks under** Well keep reading if you want more and please review if you like and have time!