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First chapter:Goodbye Kagome?
Kagome felt more tears fall down her already tear-stained cheeks. 'Mirkou..Sango..Shippou..Kaede..' she thought as their faces flashed through her mind. Suddenly she felt a shock in her heart as if she was shot with an arrow. "Inuyasha.." she said softly, falling to her knees. She started to cry into her hands. When she looked up she saw him right in front of her,
Inuyasha, the one who caused her the most pain.
Before she knew it she couldn't hold it any longer, she threw herself into his arms and strted crying more. He put his arms around her, "Kagome...what's wrong?" he asked still holding her. Though he wouldn't admit it, he hated it when she cried, especially if it was over him.
She pulled away and turned around, "Why are you out here so late? Everyone is still asleep." he asked trying to look over her shoulder. She turned back around and gave hima shard from the jewel. "That's the last shard...Inuyasha..the jewel is finished..I can go home and be a normal teenager now..I just..I knew that it would be hard for me to say goodbye..so ithought, I would leave without the pain, but it's worse than I thought.." she said still crying. He brought her into his arms once again, deeply breathing in her beautiful scent,"Kagome..don't you know that I would come for you?" he asked holding her tighter. By now she had pulled away again, "Inuyasha..it hurts me to leave but.." she stopped, 'You would only run off to Kikyou everytime you smell her near' she thought with a single tear rolling down her cheek which she wiped away quickly, frusterated at what a baby she was being, "It would hurt me to stay also." she said softly. "WHAT?! You mean you don't want to be with us anymore?!" he asked looking so much like a puppy that she had to llet out a little smile. But her smile was turned back to a frown as she thought of the pain again, "It's not that, it's just...you would always run off to Kikyou whe nu smell her." she said sadly and smiled weakly, "I'm not saying that I hate Kikyou, and I wish the best for both of you, but it hurts me when you treat me like shit and then, all of a sudden, start being sweet to me only because I look like her." Inuyasha was in total shock 'K-Kagome..what kind of answer can I give you?' he thought closing his eyes tight while looking away. She turned around and stood, "So, I've come to a conclusion....Inuyasha...I..I've decided to go home." she said closing her eyes, letting the tears fall freely.
He felt like he was a small little pup again, and she had used the strongest sword ever known to cut his heart out and crush it with her very own hands, "Please don't go." he said so softly she could barely hear him..but she did. "Inuyasha.." she said softly with a very small smile. "Wait, I'm just your "shard detector" remember?" she asked frustrated. Inuyasha stood up and turned her around so she looked him in his eyes and he took her hands in his, "Kagome?How can you say that?just because I treat you like that doesn't mean that's all you are to m-" but he cut himself off and sighed, rubbing his head. "Look, Miroku isn't gonna be the same without you, Sango is gonna act like she lost her sister, Shippou is gonna drive me crazy with his crying, Kaede is depressed enough already that it's over, and..*sigh*...I..d-don't...want..you to leave either." he said as if it took all of his strength to say it while looking down feeling the heat on his cheeks knowing that he was blushing furiously. "I-Inu-yasha?" she asked in so much shock that she could barely speak. By now Inuyasha's words had stopped her tears. "I guess I coud go to my time and think it over.." she said as if saying it to herself. "If your're not back in a week, I'm coming to get you." he said in a tone letting her know that he ment business and he wasn't about to argue about it. "Okay...Inuyasha?" she asked softly before turning around. "Hmm?" he asked looking over his shoulder before turning around himself. "Do you..s-still intend to go to hell with Kikyou?" she asked feeling the tears starting to well up in her eyes again.
He stood there for a moment, just totally silent looking like he was getting lost in his thoughts, "I can't lie to you Kagome...I really don't know." he said walking up to her. "Oh..o-okay, g-goodbye for now Inuyasha" she said a tear falling down her cheek which stained it right away. She turned around, got her bag, and headed for the well, but was stopped by Inuyasha's hand grabbing hers. She turned around and looked at him, "But I promise you, I will be here when you come home." he said assuringly as he cupped her face in his hands. She felt herself melt in those amber orbs of his, as she always did, "Did you say home?" she asked slightly surprised. He simply smiled and brought his head down to hers and kissed her forehead, giving her an answer. "Th-thank you In-inuyasha.." she said so shocked that her eyes were still wide, "s-so much." "Ya, sure, but no tears next time okay?" he said crossing his arms over his chest stubbornly, 'Hopefully there won't be a next time..' he thought softening at the thought. He watched as she went down the well. 'Please..don't let me go through anymore pain..don't let me loose her..' he thought turning around and walking away, clutching his chest.
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First chapter:Goodbye Kagome?
Kagome felt more tears fall down her already tear-stained cheeks. 'Mirkou..Sango..Shippou..Kaede..' she thought as their faces flashed through her mind. Suddenly she felt a shock in her heart as if she was shot with an arrow. "Inuyasha.." she said softly, falling to her knees. She started to cry into her hands. When she looked up she saw him right in front of her,
Inuyasha, the one who caused her the most pain.
Before she knew it she couldn't hold it any longer, she threw herself into his arms and strted crying more. He put his arms around her, "Kagome...what's wrong?" he asked still holding her. Though he wouldn't admit it, he hated it when she cried, especially if it was over him.
She pulled away and turned around, "Why are you out here so late? Everyone is still asleep." he asked trying to look over her shoulder. She turned back around and gave hima shard from the jewel. "That's the last shard...Inuyasha..the jewel is finished..I can go home and be a normal teenager now..I just..I knew that it would be hard for me to say goodbye..so ithought, I would leave without the pain, but it's worse than I thought.." she said still crying. He brought her into his arms once again, deeply breathing in her beautiful scent,"Kagome..don't you know that I would come for you?" he asked holding her tighter. By now she had pulled away again, "Inuyasha..it hurts me to leave but.." she stopped, 'You would only run off to Kikyou everytime you smell her near' she thought with a single tear rolling down her cheek which she wiped away quickly, frusterated at what a baby she was being, "It would hurt me to stay also." she said softly. "WHAT?! You mean you don't want to be with us anymore?!" he asked looking so much like a puppy that she had to llet out a little smile. But her smile was turned back to a frown as she thought of the pain again, "It's not that, it's just...you would always run off to Kikyou whe nu smell her." she said sadly and smiled weakly, "I'm not saying that I hate Kikyou, and I wish the best for both of you, but it hurts me when you treat me like shit and then, all of a sudden, start being sweet to me only because I look like her." Inuyasha was in total shock 'K-Kagome..what kind of answer can I give you?' he thought closing his eyes tight while looking away. She turned around and stood, "So, I've come to a conclusion....Inuyasha...I..I've decided to go home." she said closing her eyes, letting the tears fall freely.
He felt like he was a small little pup again, and she had used the strongest sword ever known to cut his heart out and crush it with her very own hands, "Please don't go." he said so softly she could barely hear him..but she did. "Inuyasha.." she said softly with a very small smile. "Wait, I'm just your "shard detector" remember?" she asked frustrated. Inuyasha stood up and turned her around so she looked him in his eyes and he took her hands in his, "Kagome?How can you say that?just because I treat you like that doesn't mean that's all you are to m-" but he cut himself off and sighed, rubbing his head. "Look, Miroku isn't gonna be the same without you, Sango is gonna act like she lost her sister, Shippou is gonna drive me crazy with his crying, Kaede is depressed enough already that it's over, and..*sigh*...I..d-don't...want..you to leave either." he said as if it took all of his strength to say it while looking down feeling the heat on his cheeks knowing that he was blushing furiously. "I-Inu-yasha?" she asked in so much shock that she could barely speak. By now Inuyasha's words had stopped her tears. "I guess I coud go to my time and think it over.." she said as if saying it to herself. "If your're not back in a week, I'm coming to get you." he said in a tone letting her know that he ment business and he wasn't about to argue about it. "Okay...Inuyasha?" she asked softly before turning around. "Hmm?" he asked looking over his shoulder before turning around himself. "Do you..s-still intend to go to hell with Kikyou?" she asked feeling the tears starting to well up in her eyes again.
He stood there for a moment, just totally silent looking like he was getting lost in his thoughts, "I can't lie to you Kagome...I really don't know." he said walking up to her. "Oh..o-okay, g-goodbye for now Inuyasha" she said a tear falling down her cheek which stained it right away. She turned around, got her bag, and headed for the well, but was stopped by Inuyasha's hand grabbing hers. She turned around and looked at him, "But I promise you, I will be here when you come home." he said assuringly as he cupped her face in his hands. She felt herself melt in those amber orbs of his, as she always did, "Did you say home?" she asked slightly surprised. He simply smiled and brought his head down to hers and kissed her forehead, giving her an answer. "Th-thank you In-inuyasha.." she said so shocked that her eyes were still wide, "s-so much." "Ya, sure, but no tears next time okay?" he said crossing his arms over his chest stubbornly, 'Hopefully there won't be a next time..' he thought softening at the thought. He watched as she went down the well. 'Please..don't let me go through anymore pain..don't let me loose her..' he thought turning around and walking away, clutching his chest.
