All Alone

by MissLilly235045

ITS HERE! The rewrite to ALONE! I know you've all been waiting. You don't have to read ALONE, by the way. Anyway, here's the summary: "She didn't want to be known as the coward, but she was scared. Scared, of the darkness swallowing her up. Ironic, huh?" (R&R. Cussing, Suicide Warnings, Bi-Polar Dissorder. - I've fully researched the disorder, btw; T for safety, probably M soon!)

1. Chapter 1: Sound

Hey, thought I'd re-write the story as I discovered my friend has bi-polar and I'd try to do the story on that. Also, I thought it was slightly childish, the last story! Don't worry; the plot will still stay the same!

THANK YOU TO ALL THE ALONE REVIEWERS! I LOVE YOU ALL!

Chapter 1: Sound

Her hands shook as she lifted the white pills in her hand. Raising the bottle of water to her lips, she swigged a gulp of water, before chucking the pills into her mouth and swallowing them. Smiling sadly as tears ran down her pale face, she dropped onto the bed, burying her head into the pillow, begging for sleep to come. She didn't hear the screams of her terrified roommate, or the blaring sirens as she was rushed into the ambulance. All she could hear was the words he said to her, repeating in her mind.

Freak.

So? What do you think? Better? Reviews!