This is a brand new story and I will be continuing the old one but I need ideas and I want to focus on this one xx

Chapter 1

No one's pov…

She was running through the woods away from the thing when It grabbed her and but its teeth into her neck, then everything went black.

Becks pov…

I was walking into school texting when I heard gasps and people whisper/shouting Tori's name. I turned around only to see a different looking Tori, she wore all black and hints of purple cgi/set?id=86730228. I was too busy day dreaming to notice tori coming over to me that's when I heard a faint beck in the distance.

End of pov…

That was basically an intro and I will be continuing this.

How was it?

What was 'it'?

Should I continue?