Okay sorry if my story stinks,I came up with it in the middle of the night.The chapters my come out short,but please review and tell me what I can do better.One more thing before I get on with the story,I honestly have no idea where this story is going.
Chapter 1
Intro
A young, elbony haired girl lay curled in a dark pool of poisened miasma. The miasma swirled around her, licking at her bare skin,leaveing her skin a slight red color.A jewel, placed apon her by a tainted hand, began pulsating,slowly becoming one with her heart.As the pulsating stopped her eyes opened. Her normally brown orbs of her eyes now were the same color as the miasma that circled around her.With a surge of miko power,once pure now dark,The girl stood.A curious demon cowered at this new apponet(sp?).With a longatin of fingernails and a blink of an eyes the demon sacrifce was dead.
"Perfect."