Okayy so this is my veryy first fanfiction.
I need help with it.
I mean i can wirte it and all but i want some ideas from you guys.
I just got bored and wrote this. I know it probablt isn't the best but hey! I cant help it. I dont want to become a writer or anything.
I just get in these moods and ideas and words start comeing to me so i write, type, It all. It never makes since and i always have to go back and
revise it all. I would really appreciate a friend helping read it and make sure it isnt retarded or anything like that. Just P.M me.
I'd love to talk to you.(:
Well enjoy.
Chapter 1.
I got out of bed, put on her blue silk robe, and headed downstairs for breakfast in this big house I loved. I found my arrogant asshole of a brother already sitting at the table with a bowl of lucky charms. He looked up when I walked in.
"Hello Franken bride." He said with an evil grin on his face.
"What the hell ass?" I asked.
"Nothing, You just haven't looked in a mirror obviously."
"So, whose going to see me other than you and Em? And I doubt Em's going to be saying anything about my hair."
Em was Emmali their 9 month old baby sister.
"Ryan is here, He's in the bathroom." He said smirking.
Ryan Masters was the quarterback for the Jeff-Davis Yellow Jackets. Her brothers best friend of 9 years, and football buddy. She has liked him since she was in 5th grade, They were a year ahead of her, but her and Ryan were both 16. Her brother a year older than them, but Ryan and Ethan were in the elevnth grade.
"Oh. So? Why do I care?"
She didn't like her brother knowing that she was and has been crushing on Ryan, but he wouldn't say anything until he had proof that he wouldn't be getting anytime soon.
"You know…" He was cut off by a cry. Belonging to Em, He smirked at her and said
"Baby's crying."
He hadn't so much as held Em since she was born, Let alone help take care of her. She walked down the hall, up the hall, and down the hall to the 3rd door. She opened the door walked in, and picked up her baby sister. She walked out and back to the kitchen with baby Em; To fix her a bottle.
"Hey Ethan hand me her bottle it's behind you on the counter."
"Nah. I'm eating get it your self."
"I'll get it." She recognized the voice immediately she hadn't noticed he was at the table now, Ryan. She turned and smiled at him
"Thanks. At least someone around here is willing to help."
"No problem," he said walking towards her with the bottle in his hand. He handed it to her with a smile, "Yeah Em's adorable, Man how can you not like her?" That question directed towards Ethan. He ignored it and continued eating his cereal.
"Oh, and I like you hair, Mads." He said, Smiling again. She blushed. He laughed, and reached for Em. Madelyn handed him over. Em loved Ryan, and it gave her two hands to make the bottle with.
Eight minutes later she had the bottle fixed. She walked into the living room where the guys had moved to. She walked over to Ryan to get Em so she could feed her, but when she asked for him Ryan asked a question she thought was a joke.
"Can I feed Em, please?" She was so shocked that it took her a couple minutes to answer
"Um Sure. You know how to right?"
"I may be a football player but that doesn't mean I'm stupid." he said with a grin on his face. She handed him the bottle and said
"Whatever you say. I'm going to get a shower and dressed. Can you watch her?"
"Awesome and I'd love to."
"Okay thanks if you have any problem you know where to find me knock three times."
"Gotcha" He started feeding her.
Madelyn just went upstairs she got in her shower, and let the hot water run over her for five minutes. She then shampooed, washed, and shaved her legs. Then she cut off the running water and she got out and dried off. She wrapped her hair, and slid into her robe. Then walked out into her room pulling her hair down out of the towel, and stopped short when she looked up from the floor to her bed.
Ryan was sitting their looking at her with Em pulling on his shirt collar. His mouth was dropped open, and she resisted the urge to start laughing. He looked like a guppy, a very cute guppy.
"What the hell?" She asked trying to sound mad.
"Uh…Sorry…Em won't burp and she started crying when she finished her bottle. I came up here and knocked three times. You didn't answer the door I figured you were still in the shower. so I just let myself in. I just thought I would wait until you were done. Sorry." He sounded sorry so I laughed, I couldn't believe he just bought that. He looked up, and got mad.
"What the hell?" He asked.
"Sorry it's just that I'm not mad. And it was cute that you looked away and started rambling." I stopped laughing and walked over to my closet.
"Dude not funny!"
"I'm not a dude!"
"Sorry. Anyways she stopped when you turned the water off."
"And you just decided to stay here and wait for me?" I asked.
"Yepp, I thought if I was really good you might let me hide in one of you huge suitcases to go with you guys." His voice drowning in sarcasm.
"Haha, Sure why not." I said my voice drowning in sarcasm as well.
I pulled my closet open and walked in. He followed me after laying Em on her back in the middle of the bed. What did he think I was going to give him a suitcase or something? I was looking through my shirts trying to decide which one I wanted to wear I narrowed it down to two. One a gray long-sleeve sweater the I knew fit snug. The other a short-sleeve pink aero shirt. I grabbed both, and walked over to find a pair of pants. I decide on a pair of charcoal colored skinny jeans; That would look great with either shirt. Then I went over to grab my favorite black uggs. When I reached for them I noticed that Ryan was still in my closet with me and watching me. I had forgotten he was in here with me. I grabbed my uggs, and walked over to the dresser to get panties and a bra.
"Can I help you?" I finally asked.
"Nah, Just watching."
"Um okay." I said it sounded more like a question.
I walked over to my floor length, three way view mirror, and then turned to ryan. He was Smirking! What the hell? I'm throwing him out!
"Well since I still need to get dressed you should go wait with Em."
"Aw C'mon." He said still smirking.
"No, Out!" I said laughing.
"Fine." he said pouting. This made me wonder how he felt about me.
He walked out and I turned back to the mirror and let my robe fall to the floor. I put on my bra and panties, Then slipped on my jeans I still hadn't decide on which shirt to wear. If I wore the pink shirt I'd have to wear a jacket and scarf. (It was mid-winter.) With the grey sweater I'll just need a scarf, but either way I couldn't decide.
I remembered that I had ryan right outside my closet so I walked out of my closet with the shirt in one hand and my sweater in the other. Ryan looked up and his mouth dropped open. I couldn't help but laugh at him. He slowly closed his mouth.
"Um…Wow. You look Amazing." He said causing me to laugh even harder considering the fact that I wasn't wearing a shirt.
"Thanks. Although, I don't have a shirt on." I said.
He Realized what he had done, and immediately looked down blushing. He said, "Sorry. I…Uh…" I cut him off.
"I know it's okay. I need your help," His head immediately popped up with a grin on his face, "Not like that silly. I can't decide which shirt to wear." I said holding up my hands.
"Well lets see how they look on you." He said still grinning.
I put on the pink one first knowing he would choose the sweater. He observed the pink one then said, "Next." So I took off the pink shirt and put on the grey sweater. His grin was replaced with a hanging jaw. I took that has a yes.
The neckline was low, but the scarf helped that matter. I was standing in my closet looking at the finishing results of my outfit, hair, and make-up in my mirror. I thought it all looked good together. I had on the grey sweater, a black scarf, my charcoal skinny jeans, and my black Uggs.
I curled my dark chocolate colored hair. It was flowing down in tumbles and looked great. I wore my everyday make-up. My eye shadow was a charcoal color, black eye-liner and mascara, and a light pink lip gloss. I looked good, but we will see if it catches his attention. It hasn't ever before, and if it did he didn't show it at all.
So what do you think? Cliff hanger?
I didn't think it was. Well like i said please please someone befriend me and help me with them.
P.M me i would seriously love to talk to you.
And please review and tell me what you think of it and even throw out some ideas i might use them but of course ill make sure with you first.
But please.(:
Like i said im really new at writing for people to read. I'm a little nervous of what you guys will think.(:
Well thanks i really hope you enjoyed it.(:
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