hope u like it, it's one of my first poems, so if u don't like it an think it sux, plz tell me.
an if ne1 has ne ideas of how i can rite better also tell me plz, thank u very much. ^_^
In the night
The white stands out
Against the sky
Among the stars
I soar, my wings shimmering in the moon glow
I breath in the crisp night air
Looking down at the world
That changed as the sun fell
I soar, alone
Always alone
Never with another
I am only an outcast
So in moonlight
There I fly
My wings holding me back from death
For the rest of my life, I will fly alone
me again. this poem was ment for Folken, but i guesse it cud work for any1 with wings.
once again plz review, i don't mind flames either! thanx!
^*chibi usagi2*^
an if ne1 has ne ideas of how i can rite better also tell me plz, thank u very much. ^_^
In the night
The white stands out
Against the sky
Among the stars
I soar, my wings shimmering in the moon glow
I breath in the crisp night air
Looking down at the world
That changed as the sun fell
I soar, alone
Always alone
Never with another
I am only an outcast
So in moonlight
There I fly
My wings holding me back from death
For the rest of my life, I will fly alone
me again. this poem was ment for Folken, but i guesse it cud work for any1 with wings.
once again plz review, i don't mind flames either! thanx!
^*chibi usagi2*^