can u save us

by mustacheman19

Rin was once work for a secret organiztion until she other members were used as lab rats and they ran and now they are hunting them down and Rin is starting to fight back but there is a little problem.Sesshomaru comes and gets in the way, an with a secret

1. Chapter 1

Disclaimer: I do not own inuyasha

Chapter 1

She couldn't stay long she had to keep moving or they would find her and kill her just like the rest. She wasn't safe anymore, a life for her to make was out of the question. All ways looking over her shoulders to see if THEY were there; watching her every move, deciding what they must do to obtain her and dispose of her just has they done with the rest. But this time she would be ahead of THEM, knowing their every move and not the other way around. She would not let them keep hunting her done and the rest of the team. She would become the hunter and not the prey and decide the next chest should be moved. Now Rin is the master of the game and nothing going to stop he, she will fight back and use the ability she was given to win the battle between the secret organization known as, Shatter (they fit their name so perfectly, too.) and the outcast seekers.

This is my first time putting a story on here. i think my story writing has begun to stink so would like ur guys opinion on what I wrote. Anything that needs to change. So plz review!