This is my first story so I would like positive or constructive feedback.
Disclaimer: I don't own Zootopia.
A Change of Fate
Prologue
Meet Josh. Josh tries to be your average person but is always shunned and not acknowledged by most. The only people to ever acknowledge him are his parents and his older brother but they are always away whether that is with work or in his brother's case at university studying geography at Cambridge.
A grade A/A* (UK) predicted student that is charismatic as well as above average in sport. This for some stupid reason has made him an outcast among his peers apart from 4 people that actually see him for who he is. These people are Tyler, Steven (Ste short), Jack and Cole. This person was me.
It was at break when I was talking to his friends. We usually went in the common room as most people don't go in there so I'm less likely to be bullied. They say that year 11 is a very stressful year as you have your GCSEs so they were revising for their sociology exam which was later that afternoon.
It was at this point when Cole was at his breaking point as he could not understand what social stratification was. I could see the look of worry on Cole's face. "Yo Cole, what's wrong?" I asked. Cole replied "I don't understand social stratification." I decided to explain it to him as it only took a minute before it came back to him. (Sorry can't be arsed writing what it is so I'm not inserting it).
People think I'm a calm and collective person who has a relaxed and carefree mind-set. Well that is what I try to appear to be but it's me bottling up my emotions for the sake of keeping my few friends and family happy. I have contemplated suicide numerous times, weighing up the pros and cons realising that it wasn't worth it.
I have just kept saying to myself after a bad day at school (which is often) that it will all be worth it in the end. I'll be the one with the success and the money, power and wealth. I have thought where have I gone wrong? What have I done to deserve this? I think back to year 7 realising that I was a bit of a weirdo and no matter how hard I try. I can't shake my status. Was I just a self-fulfilling prophecy? No because I tried the hardest and because of that I will live a normal and happy life and achieve things like my brother has in going off to one of the best universities in the world. At least I thought I would.
After the exam the other kept saying `I messed up` over and over. I must be one of the calmest people right now as I was one of the only people who had faith in myself and kept reassuring them that they had done fine. We had finished for the day and we were leaving the premises when a viscous dog had escaped from its house.
I shouted for my friends to scatter as we were less likely to get hurt if it was only one of us. It was just my luck and fate that the dog decided to attack me. It mauled me in the leg chest and face leaving me on deaths corridor when the owner regained control of his dog and immediately called for an ambulance trying to tend to my wounds and check if I was fine.
The ambulance arrived and stuck me on life support immediately. My parents, friends, brother and family were notified of the situation. I was awake but I was in a dire situation as I was in the hospital. I had suffered internal bleeding. The doctors tried to safe me but could not prevent the inevitable.
Everyone arrive with minutes to spare even my brother who had been lucky to get his lecturers helicopter pilot to take him up to Lancashire. Perks of being friends with the lecturer a guess. I said my goodbyes and succumbed to death. The inevitable thing in everyone's life. Except I hadn't. I suppose Nietzsche would be turning in his grave right now. I had woken up in a city. I didn't know where. But I supposed I would find out soon.