This is my first story and I'm experimenting, so please give me reviews,
suggestions, story ideas, maybe compliments, and umm stay away from
insults. If you feel the need to insult please go ahead, but don't be too
insulty.
The People from Out of the Box Enter the Real World
The cast of out of the box craw through the tunnel and stand up in a line. They smile at each other, flip on the radio, then start to do the Brady Bunch song/dance. After they finish their nifty coordination, they link arms and travel down the sidewalk.
Toni: Hey Viviane, there's a trash can, lets find junk and make
a cheap, but beautiful gift.
Viviane: Terrific Toni. Hey kids, its almost Mother's Day,
lets make you moms oven mitts out of old towels and socks.
Children: YEY, MY MOM WILL ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT!
Toni and Viviane sit on the ground Indian-style and dump the trashcan
over, being careful not to make too much of a mess. They find a
shredded pink towel, embossed with a duck. They young girl pulls it
up, raises it in the air with both hands.
Girl 1: Perfect!
Boy 1: Here's a shoelace you can sew with.
Viviane: Great, all we have to do is find more, then put
holes in the towel, and sew the shoelaces in it.
Everyone works together and tries to make their mothers oven mitts.
They go to other trashcans and collect supplies. After they discover
that it is not in any way going to work, they congratulate each other
for doing their best. They Girl 2 comes up with a brilliant idea.
Girl 2: Hey! We can sell lemonade and brownies in a
stand. Then we can take to money and buy new supplies to
make oven mitts.
Toni: Great idea. Yesterday I had some extra time and
decided to make a lemonade stand.
Viviane: Yesterday I bought some lemons.
Girl 3: My mom made brownies this morning.
Viviane: Good job everyone, you're all thinking out of
the box.
They travel in a squad as they go to each person's
house to pick up the items for the stand. The children
drag their wagon filled with lemonade and brownies, while
Toni and Viviane carry the stand. They pick their spot and
set up everything. As a teenager passes they ask if they
want to buy lemonade.
Girl 2: Hello, you look thirsty, would you like some
lemonade? We are using the money to make gift for Mother's Day!
Teenager: No f***ing way (he walks away)
Girl 2: Viviane, what does f***ing mean?
Viviane: (Viviane stares at Toni) Some people are so rude.
Never say that word.
Everyone settles themselves as they hear a noise. They look up
and gasp to find ____________ standing directly in front of
them.
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If you have any comments about this story, or suggestions for
the mystery person, please send a review. If no one complains
about this story I will write a sequel. I know you just itching
to find out who it is.
'Til next time.
The People from Out of the Box Enter the Real World
The cast of out of the box craw through the tunnel and stand up in a line. They smile at each other, flip on the radio, then start to do the Brady Bunch song/dance. After they finish their nifty coordination, they link arms and travel down the sidewalk.
Toni: Hey Viviane, there's a trash can, lets find junk and make
a cheap, but beautiful gift.
Viviane: Terrific Toni. Hey kids, its almost Mother's Day,
lets make you moms oven mitts out of old towels and socks.
Children: YEY, MY MOM WILL ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT!
Toni and Viviane sit on the ground Indian-style and dump the trashcan
over, being careful not to make too much of a mess. They find a
shredded pink towel, embossed with a duck. They young girl pulls it
up, raises it in the air with both hands.
Girl 1: Perfect!
Boy 1: Here's a shoelace you can sew with.
Viviane: Great, all we have to do is find more, then put
holes in the towel, and sew the shoelaces in it.
Everyone works together and tries to make their mothers oven mitts.
They go to other trashcans and collect supplies. After they discover
that it is not in any way going to work, they congratulate each other
for doing their best. They Girl 2 comes up with a brilliant idea.
Girl 2: Hey! We can sell lemonade and brownies in a
stand. Then we can take to money and buy new supplies to
make oven mitts.
Toni: Great idea. Yesterday I had some extra time and
decided to make a lemonade stand.
Viviane: Yesterday I bought some lemons.
Girl 3: My mom made brownies this morning.
Viviane: Good job everyone, you're all thinking out of
the box.
They travel in a squad as they go to each person's
house to pick up the items for the stand. The children
drag their wagon filled with lemonade and brownies, while
Toni and Viviane carry the stand. They pick their spot and
set up everything. As a teenager passes they ask if they
want to buy lemonade.
Girl 2: Hello, you look thirsty, would you like some
lemonade? We are using the money to make gift for Mother's Day!
Teenager: No f***ing way (he walks away)
Girl 2: Viviane, what does f***ing mean?
Viviane: (Viviane stares at Toni) Some people are so rude.
Never say that word.
Everyone settles themselves as they hear a noise. They look up
and gasp to find ____________ standing directly in front of
them.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If you have any comments about this story, or suggestions for
the mystery person, please send a review. If no one complains
about this story I will write a sequel. I know you just itching
to find out who it is.
'Til next time.