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AN: Special ( Do you mean THANKS) ((get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. (They didn't do a very good job now did they?) U rok! Justin (I thought you said you had a girlfriend…?) ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!
Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia (THAT EXPLAINS A LOT DEMENTIA) Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England (SCOTLAND) where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic (Hot Topic didn't exist in Harry Potter's time… ==") and I buy all my clothes from there. For example (*LOUD VOICE* I DON'T THINK I WANT TO KNO-) today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. (OK OK WE GET IT NOW..) I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining (how is that possible? isn't snow frozen rain?) so there was no sun (OBVIOUSLY), which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them."Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was... Draco Malfoy!"What's up Draco?" I asked."Nothing." he said then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away. AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!
First spork chapter of famous badfic My Immortal how did you like my review? Give me some feedback on how it could be funnier/cooler/points I missed? And should I continue?