This is what I wanted to happen in the Episode "Along came a Spider" from transformers animated. The first bit is some from the actual episode.
"I'm beginning to see why organic planets are off limits," Elita-One said, handing Sentinel's shield back to him.
"No amount of history or energon is worth this," Optimus said, walking up to Elita and Sentinel. "Let's go."
"Come on guys!" Sentinel pleaded, "We've come this far. Give me one good reason we should leave," He fussed, as three giant arachnids landed behind them. Optimus raised his brow, "How about three?"
Sentinel smashed down his hand and shield, creating a force field blocking the three organics from getting to them, "Go!" he yelled, "I'll cover your retreat!" Optimus immediatlely transformed and spead down a seperate passage, while Elita ran down another, yelling for him.
Optimus came to the end of the passage and transformed back into is robot mode, "Elita! Sentinel!" He gasped realising where he was, he looked down below him and murmered, "A decepticon war-ship," He turned on his head lights to investigate, "Sentinel? Elita?" He repeated, trying to figure out where they were. He was still walking when he saw the pink glow of energon cubes. "Huh, energon cubes. Who would've known? Sentinel was right." He continued to walk through the ship, still searching for his two best-friends, "Odd," he observed, looking down at the strange shapes beneath him. "I've never seen oval shaped energon," But the strange ovals started to crack open, and produced miniature versions of the giant arachnids they had just encountered. "Why do I get the feeling that that's not energon," Optimus said, pulling out his axe, but dropped it had he stepped back but got caught in a sticky web set as a trap. Over ten spiders lept out of there eggs towards him, but a charging femme scooped up his axe and scared them away.
"Thought I might find you in here," Elita-One said, cutting Optimus out of the sticky situation. Once he was out, they sprinted towards the exit, but where stopped by the organics. "We'll have to fight our way out! Use your power!" Optimus exclaimed turning towards Elita.
"It doesn't work on organincs remember?" She retorded, looking back at the arachnids.
"Not on them, on me!" She placed her hand on his chassis, using her power to borrow his weapons.
"Let's do this fast, my download won't last long." They used their grappling hooks to swing onto a pile of energon, but a spider tryed to jump on Optimus, so he swung his axe at it, throwing it onto another pile of energon, which then exploded. Seeing that they were overmatched and outnumbered, Optimus through an energon cube at one of the stalagtites on the ceiling of the cave. In the same swift motion, he and Elita used their grappling hooks to attatch to the top of the cave and pull themselves up.
"Nice work Optimus, now let's get out of here before the rest of the energon cubes-," she didn't get to finish her sentance. Her download of Optimus' weapons ran out, causing her to lose the abilitly to use her grappling hook. Optimus tryed to control her falling by catching her with his other hook, but it missed her arm.
"Ahhhhhhhhhh!" ... (sorry, I have to other way to put it)
"ELITA!"
Sentinel saw it all and went rushing over to him. "Optimus! Get out, now!"
"I need to go after her!" Optimus pleaded.
"No Optimus! There's no time, the ships gonna blow!" Sentinel all but screamed. He dragged Optimus through the cave, avoiding cracks that would have them falling to their doom. When they reached the surface of the planet, there was a massive explosion from the energon and the war-ship.
"We need to go back for Elita!" Optimus said again, trying to convince Sentinel.
Sentinel switched to his energy map, trying to locate Elita. "Optimus, I'm not picking up her energy signature. Sh she's offline."
Optimus charged at Sentinel. "This is all your fault!" He slammed him into the ground, hoping that some sort of revenge would make him feel better.
"Optimus, I'm sorry. But if we would have gone down there we would have met the same fate!" Optimus stared down at his so-called best friend. He sighed, getting off of him and helping up. "No Sentinel, I'm sorry. I shouldn't of overreacted. But... will you at least let me go back down to retrieve her body? I know it would mean a lot to her family..." He left the sentance hanging in the air.
Sentinel looked up at Optimus, "Alright, but you're going by yourself. If I have to see anymore filthly organics or her body corrupted by them, then you can count me out!" He ran back to the ship, scared out of his processor.
"Alrighty then."
Explosions rocked the ground. Elita-One didn't know which way as up and which was down, only that she couldn't get her footing and the explosions where getting closer and closer. It was so loud she couldn't even hear herself think. She stumbled around, trying to find an escape, but she couldn't see anything through all of the dust as flames.
"OPTIMUS!" she screamed, desperately hoping to get a reply. The last thing she remembered was being pulled up by Optimus' grappling hook, but losing her grip and falling into the bottomless pit she was now stuck in. What if him and Sentinel abandonned her? Left her here to die in thi sabyss. She prayed to Primus that that didn't happen.
Just when she thought the explosions would never end, they ceased completely, almost like it had never happened. She waited for a moment for them to start again, but they just stopped. It wasn't until the dust settled that she new how scrapped she was.
Arachnid organics. Tons of them.
How was she supposed to fight there alone? Even Optimus had told her that her power would never work on an organic. She braced herself, ready for battle. She had all but givenup hope of rescue now. Hope of hearing Optimus call out to her. She never did get the chance to tell him how she felt about him. She could almost hear him calling her name. His sweet bariton voice, soft smile yet strong hands...
"Elita! Elita-One!"
The sudden cry of her name jerked her out of her daze, reminding her that she was surrounded by dozens of organics with no way out, but, did she really just here Optimus call her name?
"Optimus! Are you there?" She screamed with what energy she had left, hoping it truly was Optimus.
"Elita! I'm almost here! I'm coming for you!" came his distant reply. She listened closely for the sound of his foot steps, they seemed to be getting louder and louder.
'Thank Primus,' she thought. She looked around at the organics, slowly circling around her, waiting for the perfect moment to attack. Two of the tryed their luck, only to jump and run into eachother in the air as Elita-One ducked out of the way. "Well that's gunna leave a mark," Elita-One swiveled around, finding the owner of the voice standing behind her. "Optimus!" she exclaimed, throwing her arms around him, "You came back for me!" She wasn't the femme to normally do this, but she wept into his chassis, feeling no shame for doing it in front of him. But she momentarily forgot the organics closing in on them.
"Elita, we have to get out of her. You'll need my weapons against these things," Optimus said worriedly, hugging her back. Maybe now wasn't the time to tell her how he felt. Slag, he was planning on doing it during this trip. Only Sentinel had insisted on coming. He stayed still while Elita placed her hands on his chassis, borrowing his weapons only temporarily. Hoping she wouldn't realise it, Optimus let out a content sigh. Elita-One finished the transaction and pulled out her borrowed axe.
"Let's do this."
They each charged to either side of the pack, slashing off heads and legs, and spraying foam in the eyes if the eight legged freaks. They ducked and dodged the spurts of venom and web from the deranged arachnids. A stray web suddenly caught Elita and sent her hurtling to the ground.
"Elita!" Optimus cried, seeing the whole thing. He chopped through the spider he was fighting and sprinted to where Elita-One had Fallen. "I'm Alright Optimus," She said, allowing him to help her to her feet. "It only hit my fe- DUCK!" She screamed, pulling him down and narrowly avaoiding the leaping arachnid. "Thanks."
"Anyway you can get us out of this slag-heap?" The fiesty femme asked, while smashing a spider with the blunt of her axe, while Optimus tore ones head off wih his grappling hook. "Um, stand and fight?" He said questingly, ripping an organic's leg off.
"Great."
"Sorry, that's all I got."
The continued to fight, smash, and tear apart the gang of spiders and before long, they had beatem every single one. They both collapsed from exaustion. They woke up the next day to find themselves in eachother's arms. When they realised where they were, they instantly seperated like opposite magnets.
"Um, well I uh,"
"Yeah, erm well yeah... We should probably get back to the ship," Optimus suggested awkwardly, getting to his feet. "Yes, that'd be a smart idea now wouldn't it? Show the way, Opt," Elita replied, allowing him to help her up again. "Sure thing 'Lita," He said, smiling.
They walked through the halls of the cave of silence, until Elita broke it, "So, what happened to Sentinel? I would've expected him to come in after me too," asked Elita, looking sideways at Optimus. "Yeah, about that. When you fell into the explosions, we couldn't find your energy signature so he thought you were offline, and refused to search for your body if it was corrupted by 'the filthy organics' as he so truley phrased it. I wouldn't abandon though so I told him I would search for your body alone. What I was really wanting to do was see if you were still alive."
Elita paused for a moment before answering, "Well, thanks. I really appreciate it," she smiled back up to him. "I'd rather die by the hands of a 'con than organics."
He laughed, "Yeah, I bet you would."
When they finally saw the daylight streaming through the mouth of the cave, they rushed forward, drinkking in the sunlight. But they were surprised when they reached the entrance.
"Where the frag is the ship?"
Hope you liked it! I apoligize I absolutely BUTCHERED the actual episode part. (please don't kill me ) . Next chapter will be coming soon. I'm really sorry about the short first chapter, but I think that always happens with me... PRETTY PLEASE REVIEW! it makes me very happy. And I'm sorry about the fight scene too, I majorly suck at them.
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