After Major Louis Daniel been shot, someone from his past returns. She was like a daughter and was his last partner, but he owes her an apology and she came to collect it. Will she forgive him and join the team?
"How he is Rebecca?" The whole team was there, waiting for news. I remember answering the phone and I knew that after that, everything would change.
"Rebecca?" Michel looked at me expectantly and concern.
"Still in surgery, one of the bullets caused considerable bleeding and the doctors are having difficulty in solving the problem" Tears began to fall down from my eyes and Michel hugged me tight.
"Come with me and try get some rest," Michel said, and led me back to the waiting room.
Hours passed, until someone come and tell us that Louis had been transferred to a room in intensive care unit, his condition was critical but stable for now. The atmosphere in the room changed, we could breathe with some relief, the worst part was done.
Suddenly the unit's door opened, and my eyes could not believe who was just entering.
"Oh my god" The whole team looked at me.
That black hair, those eyes full of pain, that fast steps and determined, her air that looks like someone was on a mission ... How I missed it all, someone who I never thought to see in my life, had just come through that door.
The whole team analyzed the newcomer, who she was and what she did here, were the questions that were appearing on everyone's mind. Suddenly a deadly silence fell on the room, Rebecca seemed to be looking at a ghost.
"Who are you?" Tommy asked.
The mysterious woman looked at him, "Who are you?"
Tommy did not find funny at all not get a reply and started to move towards this woman, which he didn't know but already didn't like "I made you a question."
"So do I," she said with a glare.
"Her name is Annie Williams and she was the Louis' last partner" Rebecca said, because she had finally awake from the trance, and sensed that Tommy and Annie in the same room could mean blood.
Tommy stop in his tracks, look at Annie Williams and started laughing, "Last partner? Thought it was a niece. Are you even old enough to use a gun?" He said looking defiantly.
She smiled eerily "If you want help to go the hell, damn Irishman, I will love to show you the skills I have with my gun."
Eva laughed " Tommy you better not mess with the lady, otherwise someone will be cripple"
The moment of tension decreased only to be replaced by a discomfort "What are you doing here?" Rebecca asked.
" I heard that Louis was quite injured, and can not let him die without hearing an apology" Annie said with a genuine smile.
-First chapter, I'm sorry for any grammatical mistakes or expressions, if you want to tell me what I did wrong, I appreciate a lot! It's my first fanfiction and I know it isn't nothing special but please be kind and do give your opinion. It's really important for me.