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This story is a remake of Twists of Neglect soooo please check all the boxes
Don't judge the story by its chapter,You'll never know what to expect.
"Jutsu"
"Talking"-Person
'Thinking'-Person
"Talking Bijuu/Summon"
'Thinking Bijuu/Summon
"POV"
Timeskip
Flashback: Flashback words
Mindscape:
Place:
(I do not own Naruto)
Age: 6
Story start:
It was a sad night for Naruto,He is now sent to his room again for being accused of the things his brother did.
As Naruto sat on his bed thoughts begin to fill his head. 'Why won't they believe me? Its always Rai all the time...They always favor him..even the villagers saw him like a hero of sort.'
Naruto started to tear up "sobs* D-don't they care for me..?" He said.
But Naruto wiped them off quickly and started to counter those thoughts. "N-no,They love me! I know it...yeah I should not be thinking of those things..maybe they only want me to learn,thats right."
He started repeating those words into his head and forcing himself to believe it.
'I should just sleep! Maybe the next day Kaa-san and Tou-san will let me do things.'He declared in his thoughts as he fallen asleep.
The next day:
"Yawn* Another day to live.." Naruto said as he wakes up,After that he started to fix his bed and then took a shower and of course he brushed his pearly white teeth.
Naruto then opened his closet and looked for clothes to wear. He took the black shirt with the leaf symbol on the left top of the shirt while for the shorts he took the light grey coloured with multiple pockets and lastly a black coloured slippers with a pairing ninja bandage,His skin is a little pale.
And now he started to comb his hair.
Naruto's hair colour is Crimson and his hair is long and less spiky (Sirzechs Lucifer's hairstyle.)
While his face has whisker marks and the shape is narrow while the eyes is sharp and coloured purple.
In short, Naruto is a one of a heck gorgeous little boy.
"I'm ready." He said to himself as he opens the door.
Dining room:
As Naruto approaches his parents he greeted them.
"Good morning,Tou-san and Kaa-san." But they paid no glance at him.
It made Naruto frown,Its always the same everyday as he greet them.
His parents are known as Minato Namikaze "The Fourth Hokage" and Kushina Uzumaki "The Red Death".
And then he took a sit at the dining table and waited for the food,He started to hear more silence and more silence until someone broke it.
"TOU-SAN! KAA-SAN! Goooood Mooooorniiing!" A Brash loud mouthed orange haired kid or you can him Rai.
'Tch,how lovely.' Naruto said in his mind.
The proclaimed "Hero of Konoha" and the "perfect" child of the Uzumaki-Namikaze household,A child loved by all and served by all,Pampered by everyone, A spoiled brat.
This boy is Rai Uzumaki Namikaze,His hair is spiky and coloured orange,has blue eyes while the face resembles Kushina a round one with whisker marks.
He is wearing a clothes that is similar to Minato in his academy days.
"Hey sochi,Good Morning." Minato said while waving.
"Uhuh,Tou-san" Rai replied with a grin as he walks to Kushina.
"My sochi Rai,How are you this morning?"Kushina said as she serves the breakfast.
"Ehm,I don't really know..but I know I want to eat." Rai said while his stomach growls. Minato and Kushina laughed at his antics.
"Come here you two!" Kushina said as she opens her arms for a hug.
They all looked happy and seems a "perfect" family.
But that scene made Naruto sad. His parents greeted Rai warmly and even gave him a hug,While him? he got nothing. Its like he is a stranger or even worse like he doesn't even exist,Truly heartbreaking.
And then after that they started eating breakfast.
Timeskip: Breakfast time.
The foods on the table are fried fish,shrimps and ofcourse ramen.
"Kaa-san,can you please pass the-" Naruto attempted to asked Kushina but was blocked by Rai's loud voice.
"Kaa-san! I want the RAMEN!" Rai said while his face shows gluttony.
Kushina ofcourse passed the last ramen to Rai who did not even bother to see what Naruto is eating. "Here you go." She said as she smiles at him.
Kushina and Minato has finished their breakfast,So only Rai and Naruto were left eating.
Poor Naruto, The only food left for him to eat is the half side of the fish and one small shrimp.
'Heh,God why so cruel?' He said in his mind.
As they both finish breakfast,He then decides to leave but was stopped.
"Not so fast Naruto,You will wash the dishes and clean the table." Kushina ordered as she taps the table. Minato then looked at him and said "Listen to her Naruto, You have been stubborn lately so you deserve this."
"Yeah,loser brother of mine." Rai said looking smugly at Naruto.
He then clenched his fists and said "Okay,Kaa-san I will."
Timeskip: After Washing the Dishes.
Naruto heard her mother calling.
"Naruto,Rai! Come here to the living room now." Kushina said as she arrange the papers she is holding.
And then they came infront of their mother.
"Kaa-san,What are those papers about?" Naruto asked curiously.
Kushina then answered "Your Tou-san and I decided to enroll you both to the academy."
"Wooh!They will teach me those cool ninja stuff!?" Rai said jumping up and down excitedly.
"Now,now don't yet get excited." Minato said as he sits beside Kushina. And then her wife coughed to gather their attention.
"As I said you both will be enrolled and then we will start Rai's training."Kushina said as she hugs Minato.
"B-but, What about me?" Naruto pointed at himself feeling the jealousy approach.
Minato looked at Kushina and said "Naruto,You know that Rai has this special chakra that needs assistance. You should understand."
And then Rai made a victory smirk. "Hah,They said I have special chakra and YOU don't. So you will have to wait loser."
"Oh" Thats all Naruto said dejectedly, He then recalls the story that his father told them.
Flashback: Story telling 2 Years ago.
"It was 4 years ago since I defeated the Kyuubi who attacked our village. A masked man unleashed the Kyuubi inside Kushina. It was a tough fight I defeated the masked man and never saw him again,But I manage to seal the whole Kyuubi into Rai which essentially saved the village."Minato told both of his child.
"Sugoi! I am a hero too,Right Tou-san?"Rai said while grinning.
"Yes,Sochi..you are the one who holds it back."Minato said as he hugs him.
"So what happened to me?Am I a hero too?" Naruto asked curiously.
"Oh,well my anbu managed to move you away from the village to avoid the danger..,Also its night time you both need to sleep." As he started to leave to dodge the last one.
"But what about my question? Am I a he-" Naruto said but the door was shut which stopped him to say his words.
"Hmp,I am a hero! And you are not so I will call you loser,loser."Rai said smugly as he goes to bed.
Flashback end.
"Well its time to train Rai,Go play somewhere Naruto."Kushina said as she break his thoughts.
"Okay Kaa-san." Naruto said and decided to just watch them train Rai.
'Is this it? Is this how will my life works from now on?' A thought that has formed that will start to change his life.
Chapter End.
So this is a remake of the neglect fic as I said.
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This chapter is an introduction before we go further into the main plot.
