This is my first FanFiction I have ever written. English is not my main-/mother language so there might be some misspellings and grammar fails in there. I would be very happy if anyone would give me some tips on how to write better(like describing) or maybe mention a grammar fail that keeps repeating in my text, so I can improve my English
Disclaimer:I do not own any of the White Collar Characters or the show or anything that has to do with this show at all. I am just writing this for fun and because I love this show sooooo much, I do not or will not make any money out of this! So please don't sue! ;D
F.B.I headquarters:
Neal and Peter were sitting in silence at Peter's office across from each other at his desk, while they were solving a mortgage fraud case.
They had only been sitting like this in 10 minutes, which felt like an eternity for the consultant. He leaned back and put his feet on Peter's desk, to the older man's annoyance.
"Neal" Peter ordered
"Feet down!"
Neal just looked up from the file he was reading and gave Peter a innocent look and said:
"What?".
Peter simply gave Neal a deadly look, but Neal ignored the angry glare and continued reading.
Peter breathed in a bit of frustration of Neal´s rebellion and shoved his feet hard down from the desk to the floor in anger with his hand.
Neal looked up from the file and gave a miffed look to his handler.
"What's up with you today?" he asked in a concerned voice.
"Nothing!" Peter barked back in irritation.
"Yeah right!" Neal said with confidence.
"Why can't I be annoyed with you taking your damned feet on my desk?" he hissed back to Neal while he threw the file he had just had in his hand on the desk hard.
"That's why" Neal said calmly, pointing at Peter's newly thrown file lying on his desk
"Oh, so just because I am a bit annoyed of you taking your feet on my desk. It's immediately something wrong with ME today!" Peter spat back.
"Ok, Can you please just tell me what´s going on with you?" Neal asked in a casual yet irritated voice.
" It's El." Peter said with exhausted voice.
"Elizabeth? What wrong with her?" Neal asked with a confused look.
"No! It's nothing wrong with her!" Peter said with a determined voice. "Just forget it!" the agent shrugged.
"Come on!" Neal said with a disappointed puppy eyes look.
Peter just stared at his partner for a moment before saying; " El are having some of her friends over at Halloween"
"What's so bad with that?" Neal said while he gave the older man a questioning look.
"It's for girls only! So I'll have to be out of the house all Halloween night. Have you any idea of how little there is to do at Halloween night if your not doing anything that has something to do with Halloween?" complained Peter
"No, not really. Why don't you just tell El that you don't want to be out that night? She will understand" Neal said with ease.
"She have really been looking forward to having a girl's night for a long time. I couldn't say that I didn't want to be out a night, and spoil everything for her." The agent explained with exhaustion.
"Oh….I see. You know you could stay at my place that night" the ex-con proposed.
"I don't know…I don't want to seem irritating by being there and complaining all night" Peter said with skepticism.
"No, that's ridiculous you wouldn't seem irritating…"Neal said with a little sarcasm in his voice.
"Well, that sounds great!" Peter said with happiness and continued reading the file he had thrown at his desk.
"You already got that irritating part the first time I talked to you more than 5 minutes" Neal whispered to himself.
"Did you say anything?" Peter asked when he heard Neal's whisper.
"No. Nothing at all" Neal said with his usual grin and facade at place.
Chapter 2 coming soon!