My mind was really in a strange place. Everywhere I looked I saw ghosts, goblins, monsters, slutty nurses, and vampires. Then I remembered: it's Halloween. This is my 1st Halloween as an adult, and I couldn't be more excited. I'm going as an Egyptian.

Me and my best friends Jessica and Cassie are going out to a night club to try and meet some boys and maybe even win best costume.

I have to admit to myself that the reason I'm so excited is because lately, I've been so depressed with moving out here to this dismal small town of Forks, Washington and that I haven't done much besides work and go to school. I had to move here because my parents divorced, and my mom couldn't really care for me, so I moved with my dad till I graduate and then I can go to college back east to my most sought after college- Dartmouth.

Little did I know that tonight is when my life would truly begin…

As we get t the Club, called "Midnight" I really get exited! I see a ton of people all dressed up and looking like their having a blast. Jessica keeps commenting on how stupid or slutty they look, but I know it's just because she so vain about girls who look better than her.

Once we are inside, I immediately waltz over to the bar( they don't care about age here) and I order a Cosmo. That's when I suddenly feel like someone is watching; and I look around to see this tall, brooding man with bright gold eyes just starring at me, and not in a good way either. I instantly flinch away, and act like I didn't see him and go to find my friends. But in this crowded club I can't find them! I get pushed and shoved around like a raggedy Anne doll, and I get pushed right into this mans table.

"Well hey there pretty lady, what are you supposed to be? My sex slave for the night?" the creepy man said to me.

"Uhm no, sorry I got pushed...I'll be going now."

"Wait, hang on don't go yet, we haven't even danced yet.." and with that he got up and grabbed my arm and pulled me into him.

Pplease come on, I got to go find my friends…" "Oh don't worry, we'll find them later and they can join…." That's when his friends showed up. All 5 of them.

Shit I was in trouble, with all the noise and screams of fun in this place no one would notice if I was in trouble.

He proceeded to shove me back and forth between them, "don't touch me!" I yelled, and that's when I got thrown back into the table, all I could remember were those piercing golden eyes before everything went black…..

Whatcha think?!

Should I keep going? It's my 1st story btw, so be nice=)