LuffyxRuby

I don't own one piece or any of the songs but I do own Eric And Ruby I know some one on fanfic own's a one piece character named Ruby but

I've had that name before I saw their story and it is a completly different character so dont kill or sue me!

Luffy's Girl

Hogosha Umi Island

"Nami what Island are we headed to next?"Luffy asked " The island is called Hogosha Umi, Luffy" Nami answered "Cool! Robin do ya know

what it's known for?" "Yes Captian-san, I do, it is best known for it's music and singing"

"Oh No! Here It comes!" Usopp said "ALRIGHT NOW WE CAN FINALLY FIND A MUSICAN AND A SINGER TO JOIN THE CREW!"Luffy yelled with

excitement "WE DON'T NEED NO MUSICIAN AND NO SINGER EITHER!" Yelled Zoro as he beat Luffy to a pulp. "Though another Swordsman to

spar with would be nice."Zoro said "ARRRGH is fighting all you can think about Zoro?" yelled Nami.

A few Hours later the Thousand Sunny was docked and the whole crew minus Zoro and Franky who both stayed behind to watch the ship.

The others went sight seeing and when they past an inn a blond woman with emerald green eyes came up behind Luffy and took his hat off

his head "GIVE ME BACK MY STRAW HAT BEFORE I START TO YELL!" Luffy yelled "NO!" the blond yelled "I made this hat for my husband! It

doesn't belong to you!" The crew just stood there watching the scene like some of the villagers. "Your Husband?"Luffy Asked "Yes" The

woman said "Your Husband wouldn't by any chance be Red-Haired Shanks would it because he was the one who gave me that hat and I

promised to return it back to him." "Yes, Shanks-sama is my husband well if he gave you this then I'll give it back to you" she said "You may

call me Susan-san If you like" Susan said "I'm Monkey D. Luffy But you can call me Luffy and this is my crew Nami, Robin, Usopp, Sanji,and

Chopper"Luffy said "Usopp? you are Yassop's boy?"Susan asked "Yes Ma'am"Usopp answered "Why don't you all come into my inn?" "Okay"

Luffy said They all sat down at a round table when a man that could be in his early 20's With emerald green eyes and short blood red hair "Hi

Shanks!" Luffy yelled the man completely ignored him "And just were do you thing your going young man!"Susan yelled "I'm getting off this

fuckin' island to fufill my dream Ma and there's notin youses gonna be able to do 'bout it" the man said "Eric H. Shanks, use proper English

when you speak to me and go clean your mouth out with soap!"yelled Susan "I am 20 years old Mom, I'm not a baby any more!" and with

that Eric slammed the Inn door as he left the Inn.

"Was that-"Luffy was cut off by Susan"Yes Shanks-sama and I had children two of them,"she sighed "Eric gets his father's looks,

ablity to be stubborn, and his hot-headiness and most of all his love and longing to sail the seas." Wait you had two kids were's the other

one and how come Shanks never told me he had kids like Yassop did?" Luffy asked "I never told Shanks about the children and forbid Eric to

be a pirate for the same reason, the navy, if the navy found out Eric and my daughter existed they would not hesitate to use them to get to

Shanks-sama." "So you never told him to protect your children and the man you love." Robin said "Both of my children are rebellious, the

tradition on this island is when a girl reaches the age of seventeen she must marry the man of her choosing it could even be a man who is not

native to this island but suitors come and go and my daughter refuses to marry them,"Susan sighed then gorgous woman with long blood red

hair came into the room "Mom have you seen my hairbr-"she stopped mid-sentence and stared at Luffy's eyes she slowly became lost in

those big eyes of his and he was lost in her sparkling emerald green eyes for both of them time stopped they did not even notice Sanji who

had started making un-ending vows of etneral love before Susan hit him over the head ... several times. Luffy broke the silence between them

"What's your name?" Luffy asked as he all of a sudden felt nervous he did not now why excatly but he did "Jennifer Marie Shanks but

everyone calls me Ruby." Ruby said really fast she could hardly breathe, "I'm Monkey D. Luffy But you can call me Luffy." then She bolted up

the stairs and disapered "Ruby Were are you going? I'll be right back "Susan said Susan knocked on Ruby's door "Can I come in?" she asked

a moan came through the door so like a typical mother Susan went in any way Ruby was laying down on her bed with her face in her pillow

Susan sighed and looked up and saw a poster taped to the ceiling that read WANTED MONKEY D. LUFFY 30,000,000 Beri Susan giggled "So My

Daughter has a little crush on a pirate huh?" Susan said "Shut it Mom go away!" Ruby yelled "Okay okay!" Susan said "Oh my" Ruby said

sitting up and hugging her pillow "He's a gazillon times hotter in person"Ruby said in a dased tone "Hahaha! Should I get a bucket for you to

drool in dear?"Susan teased "SHUT IT MOM!" Ruby screamed Susan laughed "Don't worry I won't tell anyone!" Susan said 'Could this man

end up being the one that my daughter will chose to marry?' Susan thought. A few hours later Ruby came down stairs ignored Sanji's new vows

of love and walked srait over to Luffy "Uh Luffy?"she asked "Yeah ?" Luffy answered "W-w-would you like to go get some Ice Cream with me?"

"ABSOLUTLY!" he answered Ruby and Luffy left the in and walked down the streets holding hands to find a Ice Cream shop. "S-so um- that is

my Dad's hat right?"Ruby asked "Yeah, it is when he gave it to me he said 'Do me a favor and keep this hat safe for me? this hat means a

lot to me so promise that you'll give it back to me someday... when you've become a great pirate.' and that's exactly what I'm gonna do" Luffy

said "Wow could you tell me more about my Dad Luffy?" Ruby asked "Yep a lot more!" Luffy said He hold Ruby everything that had happend

in the time Shanks used Luffy's home town as a base of opperations Ruby stayed quiet most of the time every once in a while she'd ask Luffy

a question and when he reached the part were Shanks saved his life she said "Wow Dad gave up his left arm for you? Mother always said

he was very brave but that's just ... Wow I don't think I could ever be that brave."she said "Your Ice Cream melted" Luffy said it was true

Ruby's Strawberry Ice Cream cone had melted all over her hands she threw the cone in the nearby trash can "Oh no I forgot Napkins!"

She said "I can fix that problem!" Luffy said he grabbed both her hands by the wrists and brought them to his eye level 'what is he doing?'

then Luffy started to lick her hands clean with his hot tounge swirling it around each finger likeing her taste even after the Ice Cream was

gone he had no clue why Ruby was moaning softly but he liked hearing her moan agian he did not know why but he liked it

then he put it back in his mouth and rested his forehead on hers Ruby sighed loudly " Uh...um Luffy?" Ruby asked their foreheads still together

"Hmmm?" he answered "Would you like to go to the west beach with me to watch the sun set?"

Ruby asked "I'd love to!" Luffy answered. At the West beach they sat on the sand to watch the sunset Luffy sat behind her and held her close

to him as she blushed and leaned her back on his chest and rested her head on his shoulder Luffy rested his chin on her head then he put his

nose down to her hair and smelled it "Mmm your hair smells nice Ruby" he said "Thank you I use a rose scented shampoo because I love the

smell of roses" she said "Yeah, me too, the rose is my favorite flower"Luffy said "I am so glad that my father saved your life Luffy or I would

have never gotten a chance to spend this wonderful day with you!" Ruby said "Yeah me too." said Luffy "come on let's get you back to your

mom she might be worried about you" Luffy said. "Yeah she does worry a lot about us hey is that another pirate ship?" Luffy looked through

his telescope and gasped not believing his eyes "What's up?" Eric said as he came from behind the unofficial couple "Your father's coming

here that's his ship" said Luffy

Shanks Stood at the front of his ship looking at Hogosha Umi Island,

'Finally I have found you again Susan-sama' Shanks thought to himself.

I redid this cause I thought Luffy and Ruby's first kiss was way to early in the story so changed it

CHAPTER 2 IS BEING TYPED AS WE SPEAK! IT WILL BE UP SOMTIME THIS COMING WEEK! ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

Okay folks you know the drill read and review! If you have read the original Luffy's Girl, please tell me in your review if each chapter I redo is better than its Orignal Verison Please and thank you!

LuffyxRuby