Sorry if it deletes and repeats some stuff. My computer is a bit glitchy and messes up the typing

please give tips and pointers so I can make this better


Luffy walked casually on the deck of the Thousand Sunny, using a roll of paper as a telescope. The crew had not seen any land ever since they left Dressrosa. They were freshly stocked on supplies, so they weren't planning to stop soon.

The rest of the crew were inside because of the rain, but that didn't stop Luffy from heading outside to look for interesting things in the dark murky water. The waves were rough and the Thousand Sunny rocked from side to side, water spilling on the deck. Luffy heard a door slam behind him and looked back to see Zolo. This distracted Luffy for a split second and he slipped on the deck and crashed into the sea. Zolo ran over to the side of the deck and dove over. He found Luffy sinking under the ship and quickly hauled him back over the rail, onto the ship. They both collapsed on the deck, shivering from the cold. Zolo got up.

"Jeez, it's such a pain having you around," he said to Luffy. Zolo climbed up to the observation tower and looked around. He started to go back down but he saw something from the corner of his eye, a dim light in the fog around the ship. He stared at it for a second and immediately realized what it was.

"Navy Ships!" he shouted to the rest of the crew. Sanji, Nami, Usopp and Franky came out.

"How many!" Nami shouted over the howling wind. Zolo looked again.

"Five, I think"

"Our ship can't handle that many!"Nami yelled.

"We have to put the ship in reverse and go around them."

Nami quickly shouted orders to the rest of the crew and they attempted to turn the ship around. Slowly at first, but the Thousand Sunny soon began to turn faster.

"Their coming closer!" Usopp shouted. Just then, the ship swung around and began to speed away from the oncoming Navy ships. The Navy was soon out of sight and the crew sighed with relief. This was the third time they had to change their course.

"If this keeps up, we'll never be able to get to the next island," Nami thought.

"Hey look!" Luffy exclaimed as he pointed towards something in the distance. Nami looked over

"Land!" The crew brought the Thousand Sunny close to the Island, preparing to dock. Luffy and the others sent a scouting party to attempt to find anything on the lush green island. The sky had turned from stormy to a brilliant bright blue, with the sun shining brightly among the fluffy white clouds. The crew explored the forest and came across a pond, where they decided to rest.

"Phew, that was tiring," Usopp said as they settled down beside the lake. They unpacked and lay down in the sun.

They decided to go for a swim in the clear blue lake and had a lot of fun

Just as they were about to get out, the sky got dark and it started raining. The rapids pulled the crew downstream and they came to an abrupt halt on a beach, tumbling onto the wet sand.

Luffy slowly opened his eyes and heard footsteps behind him. He stood up and turned around. There was a boy with spiky pink hair and a scarf with lots of people behind him.

"Who are you?" Luffy asked the boy.

"Us? "the boy replied

"We're Fairy Tail"