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Hello guys, I am back!

Now for those who don't know yet, this is the destiny Arc (aka jewel seed arc) I love season 1 a lot and can keep on watching it forever. While I liked a's the most, season 1 is by far one of my favorites. This story is meant to be like an alternate retelling of sorts and will feature some Ocs, both totally new situations, scenes from the series and even the movie will be here. I am trying my best to make this different from the show. Oh by the way just a few important notes:

'' Means thoughts

[] means telepathy

"" in bold means, a device is talking wether telepathically or normally

Disclaimer: I do not own magical girl lyrical Nanoha or any of its characters (Other than my OCS)


One midnight, in the darkness of the forest a monster was roaming around, it kept on moving around the trees while a small boy, no older than nine, kept on chasing after it. With a loud roar, the monster jumped up into the sky followed by the boy who jumped across the fence blocking his way. When he landing on the ground, he didn't stop but continued running until he reached the pier, water surrounding him and in front of him stood a cloud-like monster floating above the water, it turned around and looked at the boy however its eyes weren't visible at all, as if it didn't have any, the boy stared at the abomination with his green eyes, he tightened his grip on the red jewel which he held in his right hand and raised it up into the air as it started to glow.

"You shouldn't be here." The red jewel glowed brighter showing a blue stone in the monster's core. "Return to your rightful place," The boy made a green magic circle appear in front of him filled with runes, the wind started ruffling his short dirty blond hair. The monster opened its red eyes with a loud roar. "Enchanting sound transform into light," The boy began to chant; he glared at the monster in front of him before continuing, "and trap the abomination into the sealing circle."

"Preparing to seal," the red orb glows while it spoke in a female like mechanical voice.

The monster rushes headfirst towards the magic circle and the mage, it collided with the circle which served as a shield for the boy and blue lightning started forming between the circle and the monster. "Jewel seed; be sealed!" the boy shouted as the circle glowed even brighter than before, the monster's eyes widen as the light started piercing through it showing it's blue core. The boy did his best to stand his ground as he waited for the monster to completely vanish, for a second it did but it reformed again and the boy gaped in shock.

The cloud-like monster jumped back as it began to inflate and soon, parts of it got scared everywhere destroying the pier and boats, the mage quickly jumped down and took cover however the boats he was hiding behind soon exploded as well, he got up with dirty covering his cloth and face, he raised his hands up creating a green magic circle that shielded him from the upcoming attack but in the end he couldn't hold his shield up for long and got blown towards the forest with a scream, he fell to the ground while the monster flew away into the air.

The boy struggled with all his might to get up however he was only able to raise his head up slightly, "I have to chase after it…" soon darkness overwhelms his senses as he lied in the middle in the forest.

Next day; June 1st, 0065

In the early morning, a girl was peacefully sleeping in her bed, the covers covering her from head to toe. This peaceful sleep was interrupted by a phone ringing. The girl started touching the table searching for her phone when she was finally able to feel it, she grabbed it and closed the alarm as she got up and rubbed her eyes, she slowly stops as she looked in front of her with half-closed purple eyes, "What a strange dream…" she closed her eyes and opened them again as she looked at the window seeing the rays of the sun illuminating her room. The auburn haired girl put her phone down as she got out of her bed and slowly walked towards her closet and grabbed her white uniform with black outlines and a red ribbon, with a quick yawn she took off her pajamas and started putting her uniform on.

'I am Nanoha Takamachi, a third grader who goes to Seshiou Elementary school.'

Nanoha finished getting dressed as she walked towards the door, she slowly opened it and headed towards the bathroom.

'As for the Takamachi family, I am the youngest of four children.'

The auburn haired girl opened the door only to see a girl adjusting her blue ribbon on her school uniform, she had long auburn hair like Nanoha and the same purple eyes, her uniform was white with gold outlines and a gold colored skirt, long black socks and brown boots. The girl turned towards Nanoha and smiled, "Oh good morning Nanoha."

"Good morning sis!" Nanoha smiled back at her older sister.

'This is the eldest daughter of the Takamachi family; Yuriko Takamachi. She's smart, beautiful, and incredibly kind. Yuriko's good at drawing, athletics and academics as well, she's even the student council president of her school.'

Yuriko tied Nanoha's hair into two pigtails with a green ribbon, she started to adjust the ribbons slightly and then let go, "Here you go."

Nanoha giggled as she looked at her sister and smiled, "Thanks a lot sis."

The two sisters went downstairs towards the open kitchen, "Good morning!"

A woman with long auburn hair and purple eyes looked behind her and smiled, "Oh, Yuu, Nanoha good morning." The man sitting on the table put down the newspaper for a second, "Good morning you two."

'Those two are my father and mother.'

"You managed to wake up on your own today Nanoha, that's impressive," the father smiled at his youngest daughter. "Isn't it? Nanoha seems to be growing up so fast," Yuriko moved the chair as she sat down, "I kind of miss waking her up now…" The brown haired chuckled as he picked up his cup of coffee and looked at Yuriko, "Kids do grow up fast, take you, for example, you're already in your 2nd year of middle school."

'This is my father, Shirou Takamachi. He's the owner of our coffee shop in front of the train station, Midoriya, and the central pillar of our family.'

"Breakfast will be ready any minute now," The mother looked behind her as she looked at her two daughters and husband.

'And this is my mother, Momoko Takamachi, she's one of the people in charge of all the sweets at Midoriya. She's beautiful and kind, my beloved mother!'

"Okay," Nanoha and Yuriko said in unison as they smiled at each other.

'Oh, and by the way, Midoriya is our coffee shop at the marketplace in front of the train station that sells various cakes, cream puffs and different types of coffee. It's a really popular shop for girls as well as the ladies of the neighborhood.'

"Oh, where are the others?" Yuriko looked around, "Still in the Dojo?" Shirou nodded, "Yeah, they've been practicing for a while."

"I'll go call them," without waiting for the others to say anything she ran outside towards the dojo. "She's sure in high spirit today," Shirou smiled as he watched his daughter running. "Yeah, that's good," Yuriko grabbed a cup of coffee, "Maybe because school is starting today?"

"Yeah maybe," Momoko smiled as she put the food down, "Oh by the way, why aren't you practicing with your two brothers and cousins Yuu?"

"Well, I woke up later than usual is all. I'll practice when I get back from school," Yuriko replied to her mother as she took a sip of the coffee.

In the dojo, a boy and a girl were fighting with wooden swords while a boy with brown hair and bright brown eyes looked at them with his arm crossed, he could tell both of them were struggling. Nanoha opened the door as she peeked inside, "Good morning, breakfast is ready!"

Everyone looked at Nanoha. "Good morning," the older boy responded. "Ah, Nanoha, good morning," The girl put her sword down and smiled at the girl. The younger looking boy with long brown hair and purple eyes just raised his hand up, "Hi Nanoha."

"Here you go!" Nanoha threw two towels towards the younger boy and the girl, they both grabbed it swiftly.

"Thank you," The girl replied as she wiped her sweat with the towel.

'Those three are my two older brothers and cousin.'

"Well then Miyuki and Ryouya we'll leave it at that today," The older boy looked at his younger brother and cousin.

'My older brother, Kyouya Takamachi, is a freshman in college. Having succeeded my father in his sword school he has become Ryouya and Miyuki's teacher.'

"Okay, but let's continue when we're back from school," Miyuki looked from Kyouya to Ryouya, "I still have to beat you after all."

'This is my cousin, Miyuki Mikami; she's a second-year high school student. Due to various reasons, she's staying with us, though she's my cousin I consider her more like a clumsy older sister.'

Ryouya stopped wiping his sweat and chuckled, "You wish Miyuki."

'And of course, this is my second eldest brother, Ryouya Takamachi, though he seems a bit fierce he's actually really nice. Oh, by the way, he's Yuriko's twin and they're both second-year middle school students.'

During breakfast, all of the Takamachi family was eating in peace. "Breakfast sure is delicious, especially these scrambled eggs," Shirou smiled as he took another bite of his food. "You like it? I used tomatoes, cheese and a little bit of basil to bring out the flavor," Momoko was happy to be complemented by her husband, though she's used to that it still puts a smile on her face.

"Everyone, you should be happy to have a mother who's so good at cooking," Shirou looked at his children. "Of course," Yuriko giggled, "Mom's food is the best." Nanoha nodded, "It really is!"

"Oh, stop it dear," Momoko giggled, Shirou laughed as he looked at Momoko.

'Our parents still act like newlyweds and are always a handful.'

"Yuriko your hair is a bit messy," Kyouya looked at his little sister. "Oh, it is?" Yuriko looked at her older brother, "I'll go fix it before I leave." Kyouya sighed, "Seriously, you're already in middle school you need to pay attention to these kinds of stuff," he untied her purple ribbon as he started to fix her hair. "Sorry," Yuriko giggled as she saw from the corner of her eyes her brother tie the ribbon back into her hair. "You know Miyuki during our match your attacks were a little sloppy," Ryouya looked at his cousin. "Yeah? Well, your defense sucked with a capital S." Miyuki took a bite of her food not even looking at her cousin. "Ehh? It wasn't that bad…was it?" Ryouya questioned. "Oh yes, it was."

'Everyone gets along really well. You can really feel the love here, and even though I know everyone in this family loves me just as much there are times where I can't help feeling like a third wheel.'

Nanoha looked at everyone as she rested her chin on her hand and smiled in irritation.

Uminari City

Nanoha was walking to school when she sees broken boats and the area ahead totally destroyed. "It's really dangerous so stay away," One of the workers stops Nanoha midway. "Oh, okay," Nanoha replied politely as she looked around, 'This place is...' flashbacks of her dream came to her mind, as the man looks back in front of him she slowly walked away as she looked around, 'This this the place I saw in my dream?'

[Help me] A voice echoed in Nanoha's mind as her eyes widen in shock, she hears the same pleading sound again; looking around the girl tried her best to spot where the sound was coming from. "Over here!" Nanoha walked into the forest, jumping on the fence towards the sound, "I am sure I heard it from here." An injured boy comes into view, Nanoha stops in front of him, she looked in surprise. Nanoha quickly bends down to help, the boy slowly opens his eyes for a few seconds locking his eyes with Nanoha, at first, the brunette was surprised but she gave the boy a warm smile, "Don't worry you'll be fine."

Nanoha didn't know what to do but she knew she needed to bring the boy to the hospital as soon as she could, 'I should probably call mom and dad they would know a hospital nearby…probably.' The boy soon feels himself losing consciousness and soon everything turns black.


That's it for chapter 1, as you can tell Miyuki isn't Nanoha's sister in this. The reason I changed it because originally she was her cousin and her real surname was 'Mikami' and she's actually the daughter of Shirou's sister, I wanted to play a bit with her origins really but either way the interactions between her and the others is pretty much going to be the same, also we have two twins here; Yuriko and Ryouya, make sure to keep an eye on them. And yes Yuuno is in human form I did mean to make it like that guys, lastly, If you have any questions be sure to PM me or just ask here in a review.