DISCLAIMER: I do not own Naruto. But I may add some of my own characters. I dunno yet ill stick with the original for now.

Anyway so this if my very first fanfic and a lot of you are probably like OMG this will be horrible or be like wow haven't heard that before.

I'd also like reviews on how I could improve on this. So without further wait here's my fanfic

Prologue:

Naruto is a 5 year old child who is scorned by the entire village

(yea I know like we haven't heard that before moment Sorry) he is constantly bullied by the other kids and the adults don't give a damn he lives alone with occasional help from the hokage who brings him food and clothes and money one a week but lately naruto has been feeling uneasy in his sleep…

Chapter 1: restless nights

Naruto awoke with a start he'd been having the same dream for days now he was in what seemed to be a tunnel with pipes everywhere with a horrific growl coming from down the tunnel. naruto never walked to it for fear kept his feet firmly in place. He got up and started boiling some water and walked to the window he could see the blood red sun rising and started to get. He had a day of mischief to do he thought with a huge smirk as he pushed the weird dream to the back of his mind as he often did.

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After defacing the great stone faces naruto was bored so he decided to go to the park to have a go on the swings. "look it's that kid everyone hates!" naruto looked behind him to see 3 kids slightly older them him and at least a head taller. "hey kid this is our playground So why don't you just get lost before we have to hurt you" said the middle child the tallest of the 3 and obviously the leader.

Naruto slowly started to walk away when the kids started to pelt him with rocks. "get out of here already!" yelled the boy on the left slightly smaller but much more muscular (as muscle goes for kids) naruto ran for it the sun was slowly starting to set and naruto started to make his way home of the back streets to avoid the more populated areas where he would surely be abused.

He rounded a corner and bumped into an older man in his late 60s "sorry!" naruto immediately bowed his head the man took a step back and for a reason unknown to naruto his face was full of anger. "YOU!" he yelled naruto looked shocked and wondered what he did he had no clue he didn't deface the stone faces too badly did he? "YOU DEMON! YOU'RE THE REASON I LOST MY BELOVED!" he kicked naruto in the ribs and he went flying across the street. WHY! Naruto thought to himself WHY IS IT ALWAYS ME! The man strutted over and picked naruto up by the neck "I'll kill you and that demon you little bastard" he said softly into naruto's ears. Demon? naruto thought what was this man talking about? "What are you talking about?" coughed naruto he was starting to pass out "YOUR THAT DAMNED KYUUBI YOU LITTLE BRAT!" naruto was fading fast Kyuubi… he remembered the fox everyone used to talk about that nearly destroyed the village he was moments from blacking out when a familiar sounding voice yelled. "DROP THE BOY!" the man still staring at naruto started to turn and as turning said "AND WHOS GOING TO MAKE ME!" all the colour drained from his face and he saw who was ordering him around dressed in white robes with a wide hat with a red mark on it. "L-L-L-Lord H-H-Hokage…" he istantly dropped naruto and Bowed I was just D-Doing uhhh…) the hokage moved his hand and two ANBU grabbed the man and took him away he walked towards naruto who had passed out.

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Naruto awoke in the hospital ad looked around. what the hell happened he thought "ahh your wake I see" naruto looked to the left of him to see the hokage "naruto that man did he say anything to you" naruto remembered everything. "uhhh what do you mean" the hokage looked at him sternly "I mean did he say anything like why he attacked you?" naruto was quick to decide he would not tell the old man anything. "no all the villagers treat me like that but it's the first time it's gotten that physical" the hokage thought and had to agree the villagers simply did not like naruto and showed nothing but hatred to the poor boy "ok naruto you can go home today if you're feeling well but if you don't feel like staying home alone you can always stay here or in my office while I work ill watch over you" naruto really admired the hokage he was the only one who actually showed positive feelings to him. "its ok I can walk home"

The hokage nodded "very well naruto" as soon as the young boy left a young man walked into the hospital "you wanted to see me hokage-sama?" the man had a darkish complexion and brown hair tied into a ponytail with a scar across under his eye that ran along over his nose to the other eye."I would like you to watch out for the boy for the night" the young man nodded and jumped out the window trailing the boy and watching over him for the night. he had to admit the boy deserved some respect after what he gets put through I might check on him more regularly he thought. And then an image of a fox flashed into his head NO! he screamed mentally this boy was not responsible for that he kept thinking that over and over all night.

Meanwhile naruto was getting ready for bed he finished brushing his teeth and washing his hair then fell on his bed exhausted thinking about what the man had said Kyuubi… he thought how am I the Kyuubi he thought as he drifted off to sleep…

OK don't be too harsh if you decide to review please I know is pretty ordinary but im just starting out and ive never really written anything so if you any questions or criticisms just send me a message and I promise I will try to do better next time ok? This was more a warm up kinda thing and yes the punctuation is probably horrible and I apologise ill try fix that as we go along and I know naruto didn't learn he was kyuubi like that but I want to make it different