Ok I thought I would rewrite this story and see what happens I know it wasn't the best story when I originallywrote it but it was my first attempt of a story on Fanfiction so I'm starting it again. I will still keep my original version so you can see how I have changed/updated it.
One sunny day Spyro and Cynder were walking in the Enchanted Forest.
It had been a few months since the duo defeated Malefor and the two were glad to have some peace for a while.
"Its nice to have some peace and quiet every now and again" Spyro said.
Cynder nodded in agreement.
"What would you like to do now?" Cynder asked.
Spyro was about to answer when he thought he could hear the sound of someone struggling in a fight.
"Do you here that?" Spyro asked wondering if it was just him imagining the noise.
"Yes its coming from over there" Cynder replied pointing in a south west direction.
As they ran towards the sound it defently sounded like fighting.
When they came into a clearing they saw a smallish pink dragoness with light blue horns that were curved down in a c shape, bright yellow wings, green spikes, and tail tip fighting an army of Grublins.
Spyro was about to go and help her but before he could do anything the dragon let out an electric fury destroying the Grublins.
"Sappier where are you?" the dragon called frantically looking around.
"Are you ok?" Cynder asked.
The dragon looked at them warily for a few seconds.
"Yeah" she said starting to relax.
"Have you seen a small sapphire dragon around here?" she asked.
"No sorry" Spyro replied.
"Oh I need to find her" the dragoness said quietly.
"We can help you look for her if you want" Spyro offered.
The dragoness looked at Spyro and Cynder for a minute before making up her mind.
"Ok my name's Valentine by the way and the dragon I'm looking for is my young sister Sappier" she said.
"I'm Spyro and this is Cynder" Spyro introduced.
I know who you are your the ones who defeated The Dark Master" Valentine said.
"When did you last see your sister?" Cynder asked.
"Two days ago near the Silver River" Valentine replied.
"Come on then let's go" Spyro said he knew how dangerous it was near that river for a small dragon.
