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For the back story go to my profile and read Dani phantom Ironman.
The four soldiers were walking down a dark grey hallway in the bowls of Atlantis. "So what are we looking for again?"
"Unknown energy spike. You were there with the rest of us."
"Yeah but what are we looking for."
"Something with unknown energy I assume."
Dani woke with a start. There were voices approaching. She looked around and found herself in some strange metal room. She looked at herself and saw that she was already in phantom form. As the voices approached she started to panic. Where was she? G.I.W.? Vlad? Dear god I hope it isn't Vlad. The voices approached the room she was in and she decided to go intangible and faze through the wall on the other side of the room.
To her surprise that whole side of the room was part of the central computer core of the city ship Atlantis.
Everyone on Atlantis who wasn't awake woke up as a wail of surprise fear and pain seamed to echo from every speaker connected to Atlantis and some say from the walls themselves.
Shortly thereafter the lights began flickering from soothing white to ecto green.
A.N. so that's the pre chapter intro. I wanted to do so many of your suggestions. But for most of them I couldn't figure out a plot. I didn't want another superhero story, at least not back to back with my first one. And while a crossover with my little pony might be fun. (I had read A good phantom pony x over)I just can't think of one. Maybe later. So If I can get my beta off her but to finish the first story, and get started on this one… Hint hint.
Anyway honest critiques are welcome. Love it or hate it. The next chapters should be much longer (I hope)