My note: I know it's really short, and I gotta say, the poem has no rhyms but everybody told me it was a beautiful poem, even ifit didn't looked like one. And yes, it might have no relation with Inuaysha or any other character, but I was inspired by a fanfic I read so I wrote this. Hope you enjoy and please tell me what do you think 'bout this!!!
Disclaimer: As much as I wish to, I do not own Inuyasha. Not that he appears in the poem. It's just a warning
Alone, Lonely
She dismissed her love. He started off in a boat in the wharf of Saint Blas, he promised that he would return. And soaked in weeping she swore that she would wait for…
Thousands of moons happened and she was always in the wharf, hoping… Many afternoons nested herself in her hair and her lips. She wore the same dress and in case he returned, he wouldn't mistake.
The crabs bit her clothes, her sadness and her illusion… and the time slipped and her eyes filled with dawns and with the sea she fell in love and her body was taken root in the wharf.
Alone, alone in the forgetfulness, alone, alone with her lonely, single spirit, alone with her love, the sea, alone in the wharf of Saint Blas.
Her hair whitened but no boat gave back to her her beloved one, and in the town they said to her, they said the crazy lady of the wharf of Saint Blas. And one April day they tried to transfer her to the mental hospital; nobody could take her and from the sea they could never separated her.
Alone, alone in the forgetfulness, alone, alone with her spirit, alone, alone with her love, the sea; alone in the wharf of Saint Blas. Alone in the forgetfulness. Alone with her spirit. Alone with her love, the sea.
Alone, alone in the forgetfulness, alone, alone with her lonely, single spirit, with her love, the sea, alone in the wharf of Saint Blas. She remained. She remained. Alone, lonely. She remained. She remained with the sun and the sea. She remained there. She remained until the aim, she remained there, she remained in the wharf of Saint Blas.
Alone... Lonely...
So? What do ya think? Is it good? Did you liked it? Do you think it's horrible? Wonderful? Disgustin'? TELL ME!!! PLEASE!!!!!
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