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PASSION, LOVE, AND HATE. REVAN TALE

CHAPTER 1 KORRIBAN, AFTER THE FINAL TEST AND THE EBON HAWK

As Naomi got done killing her Sith Master Uthar and telling Yuthura that she was Revan and that she was letting her leave, she left the tomb and the Star Map. "The last Star Map was found. Good, now I go back to Carth and Jolee and-" Revan thoughts were stop because of sith Jedi attacking her. Of course Jolee and Carth were fighting them as well, inside the academy. When Carth and Jolee got done with the Sith, Revan show up in her dark Jedi suit which was cover in blood. "Sith started to attack you guys too?" she said with worry in her voice. "Yea, wait why does your-" Carth was stop at mid. sentence when more sith came at them. Carth, Jolee, and Naomi (a.k.a was
Revan). Carth look at the back of Revan head, and saw blood. "Come on boy. We need to get back to the hawk" Jolee said breaking Carth out of his thoughts. The city knew about Master Uthar death and tries to kill Revan at the most. Luckily HK was outside the Ebon Hawk with Canderous talking about something when they saw Carth, Jolee and Revan running up to the hawk. "What the freak is going on?" was all Canderous said before the sith started to shoot at them. "Question: What are these sith meatbags trying to do to us?" "That's what I like to know!" Revan got her two lightsaber (Yellow and purple) and started to fight again with Jolee, Carth, HK-47, and Canderous. After the place was clear of any sith, Revan then collapse because of her head. And Carth catch her, took her in the medical room. He got the Ebon Hawk to space and went into the main hall. After Jolee heal Revan head, he came out look around to see Carth, Mission, Canderous, HK-47, T3-M4, Zaalbar, and Juhani in the main hall. "Is she alright?" All Mission was worry about was Revan, and what happen to Revan anyways? "So what happen in there, old man" "Canderous I think you need to respect Jolee" Juhani said in her cat-ish voice. (Hehe) "First off yes she fine now, second off respect your elders." The room went silence. "All Revan needs is to rest. How long is it going to take until were at the Star Forge?" "About a week" Carth answer. In the medical room Revan was some-what asleep, she could hear what the Hawk crew was talking about. After a few minutes Revan final got into the rest she needed bad.

(Naomi Dream)

Revan was on the planet Deralia, her home planet she thought. She saw her in her teen years, her older brother Areku BlackStar. She saw her parents as well: Yuki and Erin BlackStar. Revan final remember where she got her name revan from. "NAOMI REVAN BLACSTAR GET DOWN HERE NOW!" Her mother was always worried about Naomi so much. Her father on the other hand could care less about her. That's why she would never talk about her family. Yet Naomi never knew why her parents call her Naomi Revan BlackStar? Her mother would always say that revan was her grandfather name and she always liked the name Naomi. The Jedi Council didn't give her a new identity. They gave her the old one she left behind about 5 years ago. Why would the Jedi Council give her old name back, she would never know?

Next thing Naomi knew was that she was in the medical room. She looked around the room but no one was there. She was alone, like she felt in her heart after that dream. Then Jolee walk in the room. "Ah, good to see you're awake, after all you slept for half a day, you know" "I did?" "Yep, how's your head feeling right now?" "I guess its ok" "That's good to hear. Would you like something to eat my dear?" Naomi stomach started to growl like Zaalbar. "I guess that answer my question. I'll be back my dear." "Wait Jolee, can I ask you something?" "Sure what is it my dear?" "It's about my dream I had." "Go on." "Well it's on my home planet Deralia, I was in my teen years, I look around and saw my older brother and my parents. I even know where I got my name Revan from." "Ah…. I see. Go on." My mother called my name, and then I heard my voice saying something about my parents." "What did the voice say" "The voice said that my mother was worried about me and my father-" "What did the voice say about your father?" "I rather not talk about him." "I see" "Hey Jolee can I walk around and do what I normally do?" "Yea I can't see why not." "Thanks" "No problem" Revan got up from the bed and walk to the quarters where she and Bastila shared a room. she walk over to where the footlocker was and change it a new Jedi suit, leaving her long black hair down. Sometimes she would like her hair down. After that she walk into the main hall and saw everyone but Jolee. "Revan are you ok" Mission said, crushing revan wit her hug. "Can't…Breathe…Need….Air" Carth pull the twi'lek girl from Naomi. Catching her breathe that the twi'lek girl almost killed. "Wow your hair down! Never see it like that before." "Huh?" "Your hair, beautiful." "What about it." "Nevermind." Jolee enter the room with a plate of food.

"Hunger my dear." "Um…Yea." As Revan walk over to Jolee to get her food, she felt something wrong.