My name is Victoria James. My friends call me Tori and this is how my whole life turned upside down on one day. It was my 16th birthday and the whole town practically showed up. I was opening my last present when a loud crash shattered the noise in the room . It was coming from the kitchen and when everyone came in... Silence overtook the room. There was only a few audible gasps they all found my parents dead with their throats torn out. I was so shocked that i did not even register the fact that they were gone. "What happened" I screamed. Meg my best friend said " When i came into the kitchen i found them like that. I screamed and dropped the punch bowl. I am so sorry Tori." I was so focused on the bodies that i barely heard her and then my aunt put her arms around me. The world went out of focus and the ground rushe to meet me. When I woke up all I knew was that my parents were dead and I was a orphan. When I came around for the better I was escorted to the police station. To this day I still have no idea who killed my parents. I was sent to live in the boondocks of Montana with my aunt and her fiancee . One day I was walking in the woods to get away from the pity and the accusations of my parents. Some belived i killed them just to get attention. My aunt was at work till 7:00 so i could wander for as long as i wanted. When I wandered deeper into the woods I found a golden circlet with intricate leaf designs and small green emeralds. It was the kind that princes and princess wear in the classic melodramatic fantasies that I despised while I was growing up. I was so entranced with its beauty that i reached out and picked it up. When my hand enclosed around the icy metal i felt a jolt of electricity shot through my entire body. Then my eye closed and I fell asleep.
Well what do you think? My first Fanfic so please only constructive critisism please. Love ya Passion