Mars--- The God of Love?

Author's Note: This is a little peace I wrote in band one day, and finished
in math. I think it's one of my better pieces. So please review. I don't
mind flames, you can flame any part of it you want but not the title.

Decantation: To my good friend Anime Viper, for all the friendship and
support you gave someone you didn't even know. I give my thanks.

Disclaimer: I do not own Mars! Not the books, not the planet, and not the
God.

Mars-God of love
By: Wing Zero

If paintings could cry,
This one would be in tears.
If wall could talk,
Then these tell your fears.
If the castle should fall,
Within the years,
I'll build it back,
With only your tears.
If you were to fall,
I'd catch you.
If this love cannot die,
I won't leave your side.
If the stars were to fall,
In the middle of the night,
You just need to tell me,
I'll hold you tight.
If you're unclean,
Then I'll cleanse your soul.
If you life's in a knot,
All you have to do is stop,
And say my name,
I'll come.
If the world were to end,
I'd still love you.
If you break the rules,
I'll break them too.
If you run the race,
I'll run it with you.
If you fill the space,
Fill it with my love.
If God breaks the rules,
And let's this love live,
I shall not leave you,
No matter what you did.

What do you think?! This is one of the first things I've ever written
that's not Gundam Wing and I'm very proud of it. So please R&R.