The Soul Aflame
Disclaimer-I do not own Fire Emblem or its characters. They belong to Nintendo and Intelligent Systems.
Hey this is my first Fic so any kinda critism is ok. Also if anyone knows what the people whom i talk with at the begining.
Oh well here goes nothing........really.
Im thinking those people will be Erk, Priscilla, Raven, and Jinn my main character in most of my upcoming fics.
So buckle up and don't be too critical.
"Of all the places..........Why did I let you drag me into this desert?", said Lloy; although the ghostly after image which had asked, disappeared shortly afterwards. Another quickly appeared, continuing, "A forest, a hill, somewhere with shade and backup, but no. We're here with Jinn's crazy magical theories."
"Hey it's not that bad", replied the sword-wielding mage, dodging an arrow and frying the sender with an elfire.
"Well at least find did you find what you wanted?", inquired the real assassin, driving his Wao Dao down an archer's throat. He then leapt backward up into the air disappearing and reappeared on the ground; Wao Dao away and his two killing edges out and ready.
"Yep, the Pyrocitor, the flame sword, is mine."
"Good, now let's get out of h....
He was interrupted by a sudden, "Arrgh...."
At the sound of his comrade falling, Lloy, turned, only to be nailed with an arrow to the shoulder in his mental absence. Both warriors had fallen with more wounds than years between them. As they blacked out they saw enemy nomads draw upon them, ropes in hand.
Jinn awoke with a bump. He didn't open his eyes, his time as a mercenary captive had taught him that. The first thing he noticed was the hard wooden floor beneath him. The second was that it felt like it was moving! He dared open his for a quick glance.
It appeared to be a giant sled, pulled by many horses. He listened and heard several voices.
"I coulda swore his eyes just opened, or twitched, or..." A second voice interrupted the first.
"Let 'im wake. I'll get him fer what 'e did ter Zepher."
"There'll be none o' that.", a third voice said, "We can't kill him till they get to da boss."
Good, he thought, at least they won't kill me for now. He opened his eyes again, fully, and sat up, making the three brigands jump, turn, and look at him. Jinn, however, paid them no mind. He was looking for his weapons and Lloy.
Ah
Lloy was still unconscious next to him. He continued looking around and saw their weapons and amour in a bundle, a couple of feet away. He shimmied over to Lloy, only to get kicked in the gut by the man he believed to be the second speaker.
"Gah.....!", he blurted out, rolling dangerously close to the edge of the sled.
"Ah....ah.....ah.....", said the third and largest brigand, waging his finger, "we can't kill him Sento!". He then stuck his massive foot between Jinn and the edge quicker than someone his size should be able to move. Jinn quickly struggled to his own feet, hands and, well, feet bound. A new brigand ran towards them knocking Jinn back over and shouting,
"Oi, tie down the runts! Them lords we been chasin' have been spotted! We're converging and everyone needs to be ready!". He paused here to make sure they followed his orders, before running back in the direction he came from. The three brigands smiled. Soon there'd be blood.
Well that was a uniqe beginning. Oh well. next chapter should be up the weekend. Oh and thanx to everyone who helped especially Warp Slash Gundam who got my lazy butt in gear to write these in the first place.