ALICE'S Story-(summary) she is human and has Visions. She is actually at this point called 'Mary Alice Brandon'. she is supposed to have been committed to an asylum because she has visions-(though, i am not sure if this is actually set at one-lol ). and, she is being tracked by tracker 'Jame's'. but, her old vampire friend is trying to save her. so, he steals her away from the 'asylum' or something, so he save her from james- and therefore turn her ino a vampire...

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It was terribly dark- so dark that I couldn't even see my hands as I waved them in front of me. I remembered a dream I had once had. This was exactly how I remembered it- dark, cold, and alone. Then something told me I would not live through this- no matter how far I ran, or where I would hide; I was going to die... I would die.

Although I couldn't hear him, I could sense he was close- too close. I felt the blood pump hastily through my veins, and smelt the sweat that dripped from my brow. My short legs were tiring fast, and I could no longer tell if I was still running, or unconscious- dreaming this whole thing up, of which, I desperately hoped was the case.

However, my desperate fantasy soon faded, as I came crashing into a rock hard wall, that sent me flying backwards. I let out a grunt in pain as I landed on hard tarmac. I tried instantly to scramble back up, but yelped in pain: an unseen force was pushing me roughly down; something, or someone.

"Mmmm," he breathed into my ear; his breath-hot and repulsive, "he brought a snack!!"

I wanted to scream. Scream so much-so loud-so that someone, anyone could hear me; except him. But, before I had chance to make a sound at all, someone grabbed my neck. They squeezed tightly between gnarled fingers, as if they wanted nothing more than to drain the life out of my body- my soul...my blood!!

Suddenly, a deafening roar filled my ears, and the force pushing me down and the hands strangling me disappeared.

I peered up slowly- I could feel my neck burning- and barely saw my attacker. His pale skin reflected off little light, yet I could sense that he was abnormal.

"Leave the human alone," a familiar old voice hissed, "she is not for you"

"Ho, ho, ho, the old fool speaks," the hunter chuckled, then, in a blur, stooped like a cat and opened his arms wide- a gesture. "if it means so much to you, then why did you wait all this time- unless..." he paused, and thoughtfully crossed his arms, "unless you were willing to share ...and just in time for supper-"

I pursed my lips together. Something told me that they weren't talking about cake or chocolate; I had a hunch that that weren't talking about regular food, either.

There was a low growl from within the shadows, and in a blur something large crashed into the hunter-putting him off balance. There was a load crack, and he hissed in annoyance. Suddenly, I felt like pointing a finger and laughing at him- but I knew it was not a good idea (something would happen- I could sense it) - yet, that feeling overwhelmed me, so when a pale blur collided into me, I let out a half laugh, half scream.

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Wind whizzed past my face, and even the sombre blacks seemed to shift too quickly- as if it were some living creature. I could feel solid arm that clutched my tiny waist- it was colder than the ice that blanketed the lakes each winter- I couldn't help but shiver.

What was going on? I asked myself. Who was that? Where was I? How did I get here? But, no-oneanswered them- for I was already drifting off into a deep sleep...where dreams danced regularly in my head...the visions.

ThankYou for reading:) its not the best, but please don't copy... a very big thanks to my fav friend vampiregal333:D