Well, this is a story that I made up last year, and I hope to make it better. I got the inspiration for this story from a song called "Fiction (Dreams in Digital)" (like the title ) by Orgy. Thanks to those that reviewed to my story before, I have tried my best to make this better without making you wait so long. Well, on will the story (btw it's not a one shot like last time). Enjoy!

Juuhachi's POV

Chapter 1

"The Accident"

I am 18 years old and tonight was the night I was going to shine. It's the night of my graduation dance and I was going to be noticed by everyone.

I'm wearing a black sleeveless shirt with a white long-sleeved shirt (with strips) under, a sleeveless jean jacket, skirt, navy nylons and brown boots. Obliviously I wasn't wearing that to the dance. I am going to pick up my dress at my friend's house.

Nothing could go wrong tonight, I won't let it.

"HAHAHA!" my twin brother and his best friend Ginji laughed, they were planning to crash the party, my party.

"Stop it you two!" I yelled, "You're not ruining my chances of being noticed!"

"Aw, C'mon, sis," pleaded my brother, "stop being a spoiled-sport."

"No way!" And turned, "Anyway, you're taking me to Chizuru's house." Chizuru was my best friend, and nothing will ever change that. In fact, I had two necklaces that I never take off, one is a half a heart that said "Friends" and on the bottom it says "ever." Chizuru had the other piece that said "Best," and on the bottom of that it says "For," so if you put the pieces together, it says "Best Friends Forever."

My other necklace was a locket that had a picture of Chizuru and me. Chizuru was real funny, and a coward at times, but when her friends were in trouble, she was real brave, even though she would be shaking inside.

My brother grumbled about taking me to Chizuru's and walked away with Ginji.

I breathed in the fresh air and looked to the purple sky. Everything was going great! Nothing can stop me now!

It was about 8:00, and the party started at 9:00, and I wasn't even at Chizuru's house yet! My brother knows that we (as in Chizuru and I) have to put on our make-up! And yet he's still taking his time!

"NI-CHAN!" I yelled "Hurry up!!!!!!"

"Alright, alright," he said holding his head, "grouch."

"Well, excuse me! You're making me late!"

"Its 8:15, the party doesn't start for another 45 minutes."

"I have to go to Chizuru's house!"

"Oh, that's right!"

hmph "I bet you didn't even forget!" I complained as I jumped in the car.

"Stop whining," now he complained and started-up the car.

We drove off, and it was pitch-black outside, "Thank Goodness for headlights," I said looking to the side, hardly seeing anything. But just then I saw an old man with a grey mustache, beard, and hair, and he had eerie eyes. But I noticed him, I saw him before.

"Hey, ni-chan," I said nudging my brother a little bit, "Isn't that the old professor that used to work at our school?"

"Hey, yea! It is!" he said looking at me, "They say he was kicked out for his crazy notions, he said something like 'making perfect beings,' or something like that, pretty crazy, huh?"

"Uh-huh," I nodded, "Hey I remember him! But what was his name?! I always used to fall asleep in his classes!"

"Oh, yea! I remember that!" he and I both laugh, but then a bright light came into my eyes, the light was coming from in front of us! "Ni-chan!!!! Stop! Slow Down!!!" I screamed.

My brother tried to stop or slow down, but it was too late, I knew it was too late............

I screamed one last time as the glass from the window came crashing down and we went crashing forward. My.................my dream..................what will come of that? What of my brother? What of me? I closed my eyes as the blood from my forehead came into my eyes. Tears came pouring down, as I breathed my last breath..........

How was that? Better than the last one? I hope so! PLEASE REVIEW!!!! If you don't tell me what you think, I can't write any more so please review! Also, this is IMPORTANT: I need to think of Juuhachi's real name, I tried to think of a pretty name, and all I came up with is Ayane or Aya, PLEASE tell me which one you think her name should be, or if you have a name already, please tell me. Also, can you please tell me a name for Juunana-gou? Please and Thank you! Until next time

Ja ne!