I'm trying something that I've never done before; writing fanfic poetry. Be sure to review with what you think because I really appreciate feedback in order to better myself. This poem is called Clan's Honor, though let me know if you think you have a better name for it.
In a world of misery and pain we stand united.
Through the ashes of our tortured past, we rise.
The sins of our evil have now been righted.
The truth has been brought before our eyes.
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The fight against oppression has been ended.
The warrior way of life has been upheld.
In our forest, in our home that we defended.
Our enemies of shadows have been felled.
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We're fighting on for justice 'till the rise of the sun.
Feel the darkness creeping in on every side.
We're fighting on forever 'till the battle has been won.
And may stars brought down from heaven be our guide.
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Our faith will guide us through the blackest midnight.
Our code will help us see the light of day.
Our clans will keep us safe in burning sunlight.
Our clanmates guide us through time's cruel decay.
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The stories of time-lost ancient heroes.
Fill our hearts with passion and with burning flame.
We seem to hear their voices as our echoes.
For a glory that we all still hope to claim.
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We're fighting on for justice 'till the rise of the sun.
Feel the darkness creeping in on every side.
We're fighting on forever 'till the battle has been won.
And may stars brought down from heaven be our guide.
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In a final realm of shadows our enemies now lay.
Their souls dammed to this place of eternal pain.
Trapped in the darkness, never again seeing light of day.
Forced to forever wallow in their final shame.
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But still we're fighting on for justice 'till the rise of the sun.
Feel the darkness creeping in on every side.
We're fighting on forever 'till the battle has been won.
And may stars brought down from heaven be our guide.