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Hi there Hope you like this fanfic I'm writing it's my first one I'm posting up.
I watch lots of Action, adventure and romance movies So I kind of get lots of ideas for writing stories. I also love cardcaptors.
So here are the people that will be in it Sakura-22 Li-22 Madison-22 Eli- (an: as in eriol)-22 Tory-29 Zachery-23 And everyone else. (Sakura and Madison are friends but Madison moved when she was ten)
We'll hope you enjoy this story it has action, adventure and romance And you know who's I'm talking about.
Let the story begin Can't wait to see what you guys think We'll wish me luck.*smiling nervously)
Chapter one: Escape
In the dark city of Japan was a really dangerous gang called the black scorpian's (An: I know dumb name but this is my first time remember.).There were known for there attitude and violent behavior if anyone would try to double cross them, break a deal or even killed one of there members they would kill that person and regret that he was born, there leader was Tory Kinomoto (An: I better use there last name and your probably saying why tory)
He was a very dangerous man with a horrible and cold attitude but when he was around his sister Sakura he was gentle, there mother died when Sakura was three and there father died when she was ten. "Sakura what's bugging you that your always quiet when your around here or I even get close to you" said Tory while stroking her hair waist length auburn hair.
"I can't live a normal life with your men following me every where I go, I can't think straight, I can't sleep and I can hardly go out and most of all my relationship with Micheal is falling apart" said Sakura in a cracking voice,
"What do you mean it's falling apart your to beautiful to be sad and alone and especially if your heart is starting to break" said tory in a angry voice. Sakura was really beautiful she had waist length auburn hair, emerald green eyes a slim figure and had a really kind heart made of gold(An: I just put that there because kind people do have hearts of gold)no one could ever be in a bad mood when she was around. "Listen I'm going home so see you later" said Sakura
"Okay I'll talk to Micheal and see if he can make this up to you some how alright I can't afford seeing your heart broken Sakura" said Tory then hugged his sister but before she left she asked Tory to not follow her this time and he agreed to let his sister go home alone.(An: she lives in an apartment)But Tory didn't know that Sakura was planning to leave Japan tonight and never return.
~~~~~~~~~~~somewhere in Hong Kong~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"So Li met anyone yet" said a guy with blue hair and glasses, "No Eriol not yet for some reason I haven't met that special girl yet and I would like fall in love" said Li looking out his office window which is inside a club. "Li I can't believe what I'm hearing here let me give you a list of what you own man" said Eriol,"you are the gang leader of the fierce dragons
(An:I know another dumb name)your rich, you own the most popular club here in Hong Kong ,you live in a six roomed penthouse(An:if you don't know what it is it's a house on top of a tall building and I mean really tall some his friends live there including eriol .)with a pool and your single" said Eriol. "That's just sad man" said Eriol shaking his head. "I mean I have a girlfriend and you don't Li you were the most popular guy in high school and you still are",
"I know Eriol you have told me this like two million times and you still tell me the list of the things I own" said Li, "I want a girl who has a kind attitude and listens to me when I have a problem,gives me a few back rubs when I really need it because I have back pains once in awhile" said Li looking at Eriol, "so lets just see who I'm destined to be with" said Li, "o.k. I'll bet any minute now someone will just come here and say theres an available girl and will probably play match maker" said Eriol in a sarcastic voice.
Just then a woman with long black hair and blue eyes came into Li's office and walked to Eriol, "hey Madison" said Eriol before giving her a quick kiss Madison said hey sweetie and Li just stared at them, Madison then talked to Li,
"Oh Li I just wanted to tell you that my best friend Sakura is coming to Hong Kong to Live and so is it o.k. if she can stay at your place with us since it's just me, you and Eriol we still have three spare rooms anyway,
and you can't say no because I said she can live with us sorry if I didn't ask first" said Madison with a nervous face.Li had a shock face and Eriol was giggling, looks like I won that bet said eriol, "Li something wrong" asked Madison, "no Madison and sure your friend can stay with us" said Li sitting down on his chair. "Thanks Li she just called me from Japan and just called me all of a sudden I hope nothings wrong" said Madison in a worried voice .
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Back in Japan~~~~~~~~~~~
Sakura packed her suit case with clothes and other things she needed and went to get ready for her flight.She tied her long hair in a tight bun and put a shoulder length blonde wig on so no one would recognize her when she left,
especially from her brothers gang members she knew that her brother would send them either way then put on a creamy pair of pants that was wavy at the bottom with a creamy color blazer and underneath the blazer was a white sleeveless shirt that had a turtle neck and wore creamy colored heels.
When she was done she wrote a letter and left it on her kitchen counter when she saw her taxi pull up she grabbed her purse,suitcase and her flight ticket and left (An:she called Madison when she got home)"where to miss" said the female driver, "Japan international airport please" said Sakura and the driver drove off. "I finally escaped my life" said Sakura in her head.
So what you guys think good or bad We'll I read your reviews See ya
Hi there Hope you like this fanfic I'm writing it's my first one I'm posting up.
I watch lots of Action, adventure and romance movies So I kind of get lots of ideas for writing stories. I also love cardcaptors.
So here are the people that will be in it Sakura-22 Li-22 Madison-22 Eli- (an: as in eriol)-22 Tory-29 Zachery-23 And everyone else. (Sakura and Madison are friends but Madison moved when she was ten)
We'll hope you enjoy this story it has action, adventure and romance And you know who's I'm talking about.
Let the story begin Can't wait to see what you guys think We'll wish me luck.*smiling nervously)
Chapter one: Escape
In the dark city of Japan was a really dangerous gang called the black scorpian's (An: I know dumb name but this is my first time remember.).There were known for there attitude and violent behavior if anyone would try to double cross them, break a deal or even killed one of there members they would kill that person and regret that he was born, there leader was Tory Kinomoto (An: I better use there last name and your probably saying why tory)
He was a very dangerous man with a horrible and cold attitude but when he was around his sister Sakura he was gentle, there mother died when Sakura was three and there father died when she was ten. "Sakura what's bugging you that your always quiet when your around here or I even get close to you" said Tory while stroking her hair waist length auburn hair.
"I can't live a normal life with your men following me every where I go, I can't think straight, I can't sleep and I can hardly go out and most of all my relationship with Micheal is falling apart" said Sakura in a cracking voice,
"What do you mean it's falling apart your to beautiful to be sad and alone and especially if your heart is starting to break" said tory in a angry voice. Sakura was really beautiful she had waist length auburn hair, emerald green eyes a slim figure and had a really kind heart made of gold(An: I just put that there because kind people do have hearts of gold)no one could ever be in a bad mood when she was around. "Listen I'm going home so see you later" said Sakura
"Okay I'll talk to Micheal and see if he can make this up to you some how alright I can't afford seeing your heart broken Sakura" said Tory then hugged his sister but before she left she asked Tory to not follow her this time and he agreed to let his sister go home alone.(An: she lives in an apartment)But Tory didn't know that Sakura was planning to leave Japan tonight and never return.
~~~~~~~~~~~somewhere in Hong Kong~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"So Li met anyone yet" said a guy with blue hair and glasses, "No Eriol not yet for some reason I haven't met that special girl yet and I would like fall in love" said Li looking out his office window which is inside a club. "Li I can't believe what I'm hearing here let me give you a list of what you own man" said Eriol,"you are the gang leader of the fierce dragons
(An:I know another dumb name)your rich, you own the most popular club here in Hong Kong ,you live in a six roomed penthouse(An:if you don't know what it is it's a house on top of a tall building and I mean really tall some his friends live there including eriol .)with a pool and your single" said Eriol. "That's just sad man" said Eriol shaking his head. "I mean I have a girlfriend and you don't Li you were the most popular guy in high school and you still are",
"I know Eriol you have told me this like two million times and you still tell me the list of the things I own" said Li, "I want a girl who has a kind attitude and listens to me when I have a problem,gives me a few back rubs when I really need it because I have back pains once in awhile" said Li looking at Eriol, "so lets just see who I'm destined to be with" said Li, "o.k. I'll bet any minute now someone will just come here and say theres an available girl and will probably play match maker" said Eriol in a sarcastic voice.
Just then a woman with long black hair and blue eyes came into Li's office and walked to Eriol, "hey Madison" said Eriol before giving her a quick kiss Madison said hey sweetie and Li just stared at them, Madison then talked to Li,
"Oh Li I just wanted to tell you that my best friend Sakura is coming to Hong Kong to Live and so is it o.k. if she can stay at your place with us since it's just me, you and Eriol we still have three spare rooms anyway,
and you can't say no because I said she can live with us sorry if I didn't ask first" said Madison with a nervous face.Li had a shock face and Eriol was giggling, looks like I won that bet said eriol, "Li something wrong" asked Madison, "no Madison and sure your friend can stay with us" said Li sitting down on his chair. "Thanks Li she just called me from Japan and just called me all of a sudden I hope nothings wrong" said Madison in a worried voice .
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Back in Japan~~~~~~~~~~~
Sakura packed her suit case with clothes and other things she needed and went to get ready for her flight.She tied her long hair in a tight bun and put a shoulder length blonde wig on so no one would recognize her when she left,
especially from her brothers gang members she knew that her brother would send them either way then put on a creamy pair of pants that was wavy at the bottom with a creamy color blazer and underneath the blazer was a white sleeveless shirt that had a turtle neck and wore creamy colored heels.
When she was done she wrote a letter and left it on her kitchen counter when she saw her taxi pull up she grabbed her purse,suitcase and her flight ticket and left (An:she called Madison when she got home)"where to miss" said the female driver, "Japan international airport please" said Sakura and the driver drove off. "I finally escaped my life" said Sakura in her head.
So what you guys think good or bad We'll I read your reviews See ya