A/N: One of those things that crept from my fingers out of nowhere; it started out as being entirely original, but then took a decidedly Phantomish bent. Ergo, I flexed my nearly atrophied fanpoetry muscles and decided to carry it to term.
I'm not enthralled with the ending, but I love the continuous AABABB pattern; not only have I never used it before, but the fact that the entire poem is made up of it is really quite amazing for me--my usual poetry either has no pattern at all, utilizes the boring old ABAB, AABB, or AABA patterns, or in most cases goes higgledy-piggledy with all those patterns combined, along with some odd pseudo-pattern like ABACBDCD thrown in for no particular reason.
But enough of the poetic rambling.
As far as any explanations or interpretations of which final lair scene from which phanverse this is based upon, I personally wrote it as a hybrid of Leroux, ALW stage, 2004 film, and a nice healthy dose of AU.
Make of it what you will.
Elegant in softened white
Looking like a fairy sprite
Shuddering with promised sin
And in the mirror's ghastly light
To see the work of fingers thin—
A cake to wrap your body in.
Dripping lace and eyelet-holes
Flowing fabric down it goes
Dirtying on greenish floor
Where the hem has met the toes
And never you have gone before
Except for when the music soared.
You find a knife upon the stand
It glimmers sweetly as it can
You'd like to meet it with your breast—
But courage is like sliding sand;
Your heart, it shivers in your chest—
Your wretched heart, thrice cursed, twice blessed.
Your soul will die tonight, you know
No matter how the night may go
The blackness mangles up your dress—
You long so for less damning clothes.
The finger points, and feels a tress—
A silken lock which he loves best.
The eyes have met your trembling gaze
The sickly flesh is like a maze
You feel just like a slab of meat—
You wish for more forgotten days
But now he'll burn you up like wheat
And plunder you in virgin sheets.
The knife you grab, but let it fall
For he's no monster after all
The eyes have taken over you
And slowly put your mind in thrall.
Your feet are cold—you have no shoes
And slipping in a mucky ooze
You fall like water down the steps
Down the steps that you once leapt
With wonder and with childlike awe
Not dreaming here that you'd be kept
A prisoner in this black maw
With this dark demon that you saw
So debonair, so swift and sleek
A sensual breath upon your cheek
A hand that glided 'cross your waist
And made you breathless for a week
The smooth skin that your fingers traced
Like heaven to what the mask encased—
A raw and ravaged cheek, eye, brow
The face that leans above you now
As darkness takes your mind and sight
You whisper "music of the night"
And while you're borne across the floor
Your soul begins to take its flight
Carried through the darkened door
Captive, broken, nevermore.
