hi guys this is about Loren having an older twin sister named Maxie she is 19 years old while Loren is 18 she just got back from college and is visiting Loren and Nora and is meeting everyone for the first time in their lives how does this play out R&R ENJOY
Maxie's POV
Hi i'm Maxie Tate twin sister of Loren Tate i'm 20 years old and just got back from college to visit my mom and Loren i just pulled up at the house and it looked like they were having some kind of dinner so i got out the car and walked to the back door and knocked i heared it got quiet and Loren came to the back door to answer and as soon as she did i tackled her and started laughing*
Me: hi mom and Loren
Loren: you idiot you almost gave me a heart attack
Nora: yeah that was random
Me: that's who i am, hello random people i don't know and hardly care to know
Nora: Maxie!?
Me: well sorry i don't
Loren: can you at least try to get to know them?
Me: ok fine...
Loren: this is my boyfriend Eddie
Me: hi Edward..
Eddie: hi?
Loren: this is Max Eddie's dad
Me: hey another twin
*Max looks confused*
Me: my name is Maxie
Max: oh okay well i guess so
Loren: this is Jake, Kelly, Ian, and of course you know Mel..
Me: hi,hi,nice to meet you mate,and of course Mel
Mel: hiya random how ya doin?
Me: wired and random so nothing's changed
Eddie: *whispers* your sister is wired...
Me: i heared that cracker berallel
Eddie: you are just all kinds of wired aren't you?
Me: yep you got that right Edward...well im tired im going to bed nice meeting all you random random people
* i walked out the front door and climbed my way to the balcony and everyone came out to see where i went*
Loren: oh god...Maxie are you really gonna sleep up there?
Me: leave me alone lollipop trying to sleep here!
*Loren shook her head and everyone went inside for one more hour and the others left except Mel, Ian,Eddie,& Max*
sorry it's short i just don't know to countinue or not i might not tell me what you guys think...?