Kibishii fuyu no kokoro does not own naruto and if he did lee would be in every episode/chapter depending on what you like because he kicks ass like a mo fo lee do the opening "YOSH, AND SO THE FLAMES OF YOUTH EXPLODE, BEHOLD THE STORY AND PLEASE REVIEW, FLAMES WILL BE USED TO LIGHT MY FIREPLACE TO KEEP ME WARM AT NIGHT"
"kyubi talk"
"Thinking/mind scape talk"
You will know when I change scene or time skip but if u find the way I do this confusing let me know and I'll do what other people usually do in that situation, and jutsu is finished with no jutsu so if u can't figure that out than ….. Sorry.
The cool wind blew through the trees and gently touched the two men one standing, and the other slouched on the ground, back against a tree. Panting slightly the man against the tree smiled "Naruto is long gone and you can't get too him now you stinking traitor" he said in anger. Fist tightening on the weapon in his hand the man standing said "how can you protect that demon he killed your family, and yet here you are bleeding for him" shaking his head in confusion and frustration mizuki frowned shifting his feet for a better standing position.
Growling at the look of humor on iruka's face mizuki clenched his fist in anger again, "what good is there in protecting the one who killed your parents?" asked the traitor in an angry tone scowling at the bloodied iruka. "don't you see Naruto is like me, anything is possible with that scroll, and there is no way Naruto, the demon fox won't use it to destroy the village" stated mizuki in a confident tone trying to hurt iruka emotionally before he died.
Smiling iruka said "your right, if naruto was the fox as you say" grinning at mizuki iruka said with pride "but Naruto is an excellent student that I recognize, he's hardworking, earnest, clumsy, and no one recognizes him." Glaring up at mizuki now anger filling him iruka shifted his hands on the ground to try and stand. "He knows the pain of others, he is not the monster fox he is uzumaki Naruto of Konoha!"
Standing with a look of disgust on his face mizuki muttered in frustration "idiot"shifting into a fighting stance mizuki declared in a victorious voice "iruka i said i would kill you later, but i take that back". We have all seen this scene before, but wait isn't the hero supposed to show up here. "Die now!" spinning the fuma shuriken in his hand mizuki leapt towards iruka.
Lying at the base of a huge tree iruka smiled "at least Naruto got away safely". In the end he had led a good life. [Flash back]
Laughing as Naruto hungrily slurped his ramen, iruka chuckled "it's not going to disappear, slow down". "nuw hawve tuo tran, mwust eat fwast" replied Naruto around a mouthful of ramen. Laughing harder as the boy nearly choked.
Slapping him on the back iruka smiled again as had a fit that Naruto was spiting broth all over his counter. "looks like you have some work to do" commented a still laughing umino. Who looked down to see Naruto was gone, "uwa hey Naruto come back here I won't clean this up u animal!" shouted iruka angrily as a vein popped out in his head, only to realize that Naruto was already gone.
"I had to clean it up myself" thought iruka as he watched mizuki get closer to him.
Sprinting from his hiding spot to stop mizuki from killing his sensei, naruto leapt to knee him in the face, but was knocked aside by a back hand from mizuki. "nice try kid but I have been a ninja longer than you have been alive, you think a cheap trick like that can stop me?" asked a triumphant chunin.
"Fight me if you think you can win" naruto spat out pushing himself to his feet. Laughing at naruto and stabbing his weapon into the ground mizuki turned and snarled at the kid. "Damn kid thinks I'm some kind of punk, alright time to teach him a lesson".
Naruto had the wind knocked out of him by a fist to the gut, and that was followed by a kick to the chest. Flipping in the air to land on his knee naruto faced mizuki with determined eyes, "I wont lose to you" shouted the blond in anger as he sprinted at mizuki again only for it to have the same result. Picking himself up again Naruto tried to see a way through his defense "so he uses a burst of speed to close the distance then knocks you back to stop a counter attack, I'll have to get creative" thought Naruto anger lacing him.
"You're pathetic, thinking you can fight me i-will-tear-you-apart" stated mizuki even angrier that this kid thought he could fight an experienced ninja. Clenching his fists and snarling at Naruto mizuki took off using another burst of speed he hit naruto in the face, but this was what the blond was waiting for, as he unrolled some ninja wire and wrapped it around mizuki's arm as the fist connected. Using the wire naruto pulled mizuki into a haymaker punch to the stomach and followed up with a quick three punch combo to the face, ribs, and back to the face. Before leaping into the air and kicking him in the bottom of the jaw hard enough to lift him off the ground and toss him away.
Breathing hard naruto smiled at the prone form of mizuki lying on the ground, but his smile faded as mizuki rose to his feet as if hit he had taken didn't hurt at all. Looking at naruto, mizuki smiled "this is pissing me off, I better finish this before anbu shows up" thought a worried mizuki. "Katon: goukakyuu no jutsu" naruto leapt off the ground just in time to dodge the huge fireball that came his way. Landing he placed his hands together "if he wants a ninjutsu battle so be it" "kage bunshin no jutsu"
The air was thick with smoke and movement could be detected behind it. As the smoke cleared 200 naruto's stood grinning at mizuki "ALRIGHT LETS GET WILD" they all shouted at once leaping at mizuki, who proceeded to take out two opponents to his left with thrown kunai, only to get a fist to the face. Smiling in triumph naruto was shocked when mizuki exploded into smoke. "Replacement jutsu" naruto said frustration searching the area for the traitor.
"Katon: goukakyuu no jutsu" mizuki shouted from up in the trees letting loose a ball of flame which enveloped the clones while naruto was thrown out of the way. Laughing when the smoke cleared and naruto was nowhere in sight mizuki thought "he must have turned to dust under my power".
Facing iruka mizuki smiled evilly "now you die" sprinting forward and grabbing the huge fuma shuriken mizuki began to spin said weapon and threw it at the helpless iruka "naruto thank you for trying" iruka thought as the weapon imbedded its self into his chest. As the academy instructor died his life flashed before his eyes and he felt peace envelope him.
Laughing at iruka mizuki turned to search for the forbidden scroll, and was shocked at what he saw "impossible". His whole being was shaken.
Naruto, walking into the clearing after he recovered. Dropped to his knees at the sight of iruka's lifeless corpse and began to cry. "I'm too late iruka sensei forgive me".
"Oh yes that's right, i killed iruka, and now there is no one left to help you", mizuki was enjoying himself now "he finally understands "Spinning the bloody weapon mizuki slowly walked forward confident the fight was won. "In the end you couldn't even help him, you just let him die and now you shall join him, did you really think you could fight a ninja who survived the kyubi attack" smirked the weapon toting chunin in confidence.
At the man's words anguish was replaced with rage, rage at him for killing someone precious to him, at the village for hating him, and anger at himself for letting iruka die".
"I'm gunna kill you motherfucker!" screamed naruto all his anger pouring into a bestial roar throwing a kunai snatched from his pouch knocking the fuma shuriken out of mizukis hand. Then immediately Rushing forward instinctively drawing a kunai from his pouch, mizuki also drew a kunai and charged, but just as the knives were about to clash time froze, and naruto was transported to his mind scape.
Standing there in front of a huge cage with a seal scribed on the front a voice called out to him. "Do you want revenge on all those who stand against your happiness, do you hate this man before you?" "Yes" naruto whispered back anger in his voice, he knew who he was speaking to, no other being could have such a cruel, evil voice. "yes kyubi i want to destroy him" "hahahahahaha, good now i shall give you but an ounce of my power, and i shall make you into a true shinobi in one fell swoop but, if you want that you must tear this seal from the door, allowing me to pass through you, and into the demon realm, but be warned there will be side effects" smirked the demon fox in excitement. "Do you think i care, I want him dead" said Naruto acidly, "well then what are you waiting for" taunted the fox.
Running forward naruto let all the pain he had kept bottled up all these years pour out of him and into the seal in the form of rage, and hate. As the world turned white naruto was left with the after image of a horrified fox's face burned into his memory and a demonic scream of "noooooooooo".
An explosion rocked the clearing in which the two would be combatant's occupied, mizuki being the experienced ninja he was leap back receiving only minor wounds. "What the hell was that?" spouted the chunin shocked, he had lost sight of the kid after that blast and was staring at the last place he saw him before all the confusion, and sure enough as the smoke cleared a shape appeared.
Standing there with his back bent down, arms hanging past his lowered head as if broken, naruto's face was hidden in the shadow of his bangs. "Why...head...hurt?" the young teen muttered in confusion. Clearly not thinking all that straight, gazing up slowly to stare at mizuki, naruto's eyes flashed with hate "you...kill...you!" and flinging himself forward arms flapping behind him forgotten, naruto kicked at mizuki's chest, spinning to the left mizuki barely dodged only to be tagged by a kick to the shoulder as naruto spun quickly using his momentum to power the speed of the kick.
Slowly pushing himself off the ground mizuki stared in fear and disbelief at what he saw, there standing before him was, naruto uzumaki hair wild and hands finally remembered balled into fists by his sides, chakra swirling around him making his whole body seem to be wreathed in blue flames. "Please" mizuki pleaded "have mercy".
Shaking his head naruto raised his hand above his head knowledge suddenly sprouting from his mind "sorry" muttered the crazed blond finally speaking in full sentences again. Rage flooding through him he muttered heatedly "All out of mercy". Mizuki's eyes widening in fear he released a scream, as if it was torn from his soul."eyaaaaaaaaaaaaa!".
Swinging his hand down in a slicing motion diagonally in front of the traitor he muttered automatically "Kaze rirīsu:-Fū no ha no jutsu". Turning and walking away from mizuki as blood sprayed from the wound that had literally cut him in half a red rain began to fall on naruto covering his face in blood. He had walked not even ten paces before his eyes grew wide as memories and knowledge suddenly flooded his mind, dropping to his knees and clutching his head in pain naruto began to black out, falling forward onto his face in the bloody mud, his last thought before he entered blackness was "I'm sorry iruka sensei i wasn't strong enough...forgive me please". And tears streaming down his face Naruto blacked out.
So this is the end of the first chapter of my story its more to see what you guys think than anything else I will start writing the next chapter immediately, as I do like the concept so far but it is not out of my nature to take suggestions so pleases R&R and let your youthfulness explode forth bye for now.
I have up dated this chapter it needed a few descriptive words among other things so please enjoy.
Kaze rirīsu:-Fū no ha no jutsu = wind release: wind blade jutsu it creates a high density wind sharpened to a blade able to slice through a person evidently, it is similar to a jutsu used by an anbu in one of the latest episodes of Naruto. There should be a new chapter up in the next few days. I just re did this chapter adding in some small stuff.