I am here to bring to you my very first written fanfiction. I have been reading alot of Ratchet and Clank fanfictions lately and i figured i would give it a shot into writing my own so feedback is appreciated, just dont hate. this is mostly a rewrite for R&C 1 but some of the plot and events will change to fit in with the story.
if you enjoyed this chapter of the story feel free to leave feedback, this is my first fanficton ever wrote and i hope that this will encourage me to write more.
Thank you all, and enjoy
Disclaimer:
Ratchet and Clank, associated characters, weapons, locations, etc. belong to insomniac games. some real world companies and organizations belong to their respective owners, etc. I only own the right to some characters and some weapons and events introduced into the story.
"I walk a lonely road
The only one that I have ever known
Don't know where it goes
But it's home to me and I walk alone"
-Boulevard of broken dreams:Green Day
United States of America
Planet Earth
7:30pm EST
Chapter 1: Prologue
The stars lit up the night sky as Jordan looked up and observed the constellations. Jordan was very intelligent not that he really cared, standing at 5'1" and the age of 16, Jordan had a sort of athletic build due to his interest in free running and parkour. He had pale skin, brownish hair, a short mouth with thin lips, and grayish blue eyes. His attire of choice would be a Short sleeved graphic shirt with jeans but he mostly wore a black and grey checkerboard jacket with the hood over his head. He wore red athletic shoes with black laces, And a sheath on his right leg storing a U.S. M1942 Machete.
Jordan's personality wasn't very happy, when he was young he was abandoned by his parents and now he lives with foster parents as a Lonely - Depressed kinda guy with a low, monotone to his voice. He doesn't have very good social skills mostly not talking or avoiding conversation with everyone. These traits made it difficult for him to make friends, which he had none, the only friends he had were his foster parents and a set of small Russian nesting dolls he carried in his jacket pocket. He didn't exactly trust people either so he tried avoiding friendships, or not even try at all. But he is able to push on and solve problems well by himself.
Jordan has always had a fascination with planets and everything beyond the Milky Way galaxy, he's always been a strong believer in there being more intelligent life out there then just human but never did think about it. On this night he sat outside his yard with his dolls in one hand just staring up in the stars. He looked really depressed but more than what he usually was, today at school someone he really trusted betrayed him and it hurted him greatly. Most nights he would just sit in his room and wallow in self pity, he just wants to know and be friends with just one person that he can trust but he doesn't know how it will happen.
All he wanted was an answer.
Suddenly there was a dim white light behind a shed, Jordan notice this and walked over to it. "Hey is there anyone over there"... No response, suddenly the light got brighter the closer he got to it he then slowly pulled out his machete then once he was standing face to face with the light he could feel as if a force was pulling him into it. He was soon being sucked into the light, despite resisting he was soon sucked into the light and then, Everything went dark after that. After his parents heard a sound coming from the yard they went out and didn't see Jordan or anything of him, they searched the yard for any sign of him but there was none.
Their child was gone
Kyzil plateau
Planet Veldin
1:24pm GST
Ratchet slowly walked out of his garage with a wrench in his hand ready to continue on his work. After months of hard work he would finally have a functioning ship and he could finally leave this dust bowl of a planet. He then hopped up on a crate due to his height and adjusted the circuit boards for the thrusters, he then pressed a button on his glove and then a female voice could be heard from it, "Final step, attach the robotic ignition system thank you for using helpdesk technology". he then sighed in frustration and sat on top of a small rock.
With nothing to do he just sat there and thought about things, he didn't exactly have much friends except for the occasional customer who visited his garage to get something fixed but he mostly referred to them as clients then true friends. And due to his work he would rarely socialize with anyone at all, let alone anyone of his own kind. He's actually seen no lombaxes at all in his lifetime.
Ratchet then laid on the rock and closed his eyes, ratchet felt truly alone, what's the point on exploring the universe if there's no one to explore it with let alone appreciate it with. He needed a true friendship, he wanted to be friends with someone who could appreciate him for what he does.
What he needed was an answer.
Suddenly he looked up and saw what was only to be described as a giant fireball coming down at a dangerous speed. It then hit the ground with a loud crash and ratchet followed the smoke to see what it was. After dispatching a few creatures and robots with his wrench he looked into the crater and saw it was a ship crash, as the smoked dissipated he saw a body, dirty, and cut up lying next to a metal thing. He went over and rolled it over and saw it as male but he didn't recognize his species but he was still alive, 'This guys still alive, I better patch him up'. Heaving the body over his shoulders he also picked up what looked liked to be a compact robot, on the way back he couldn't help but think.
This could be the answer he was looking for
I hope you enjoyed the first chapter to this fanfiction. as i previously said this is my first one ever written so I do appreciate feedback (positive or neutral). If you did enjoy it then the next chapter will be up fairly soon.
Thank you for reading
