Disclaimer: If i owned Harry Potter and Co would i be sat at my computer with no money and writing Fanfiction? i dont think so!
A/N: I know I havent updated my other fic Quidditch Love but i will update that next week with a nice long chapter! I am NOTabandoning it!
Becoming Undone
Chapter 1
"Welcome, welcome my fellow Death Eaters. It has been an awful long time don't you say Wormtail?"
"Y-y-yes m-m-aster" squeaked the ratty looking man kneeling besides him.
"Yes, yes it seems as if it was only yesterday I sent my most faithful servant into Hogwarts, and tonight my servant will bring me all I want to know about that muggle loving fool and that Potter, and everything they are planning."
Tonight is the night where fools become Death Eaters. The Initiation. I, Draco Orion Lucius Malfoy have already become a Death Eater, and it was not out of choice. Everyone knows who my father is right? Well that should obviously tell you something. I don't have a choice when it comes to my life.
So anyway I became a Death Eater this time last year. Just before my sixth year at Hogwarts and the reason you may ask? I don't know how people can live without much money and if I didn't join my father would have disowned me. That's reason number one, reason number two is well my father found out who I've been feeling something for and it's for her safety. She of course doesn't know I'm in lo….erm she doesn't know I feel, yes a much better word, feel for her, and I want to keep it that way. So here I am stuck in this graveyard looking place, in the freezing cold, kneeling on the ground and my silk robes are completely ruined I know it! This is all because his stupid servant hasn't showed up yet.
I wonder who it is, if they go to Hogwarts. I would have said Snape but he's here and none of the other teachers seem to be capable enough to be Death Eaters. It might be a student, probably a Slytherin Seventh Year…but no that impossible because Crabbe, Goyle, Pansy, and Zabini are already here. Might be Filch. What the hell am I thinking? He's a squib, that just explains it self.
I should really be listening to what that twat is saying. Idiot Voldy going on about "pureblood this and pureblood that" and he isn't even pureblood!
Thank the gods Snape gave my Occlumency lessons and I now have a knack for Legilimency! Oh did I mention I'm a spy for the Order of the Phoenix?
Ok so its been over an hour and his stupid inconsiderate lazy he-who-can-not-keep-time servant has yet to arrive! Good thing though is now were moving to the house on top of the hill which overlooks the graveyard and to be honest I would rather stay here. The house just looks creepy and derelict, and it is in the inside. When I first came here my thought was "who did he kill for this place?" and I soon found out he killed his own family. His grandparents and his father, because they were muggles. I don't think the idiot realises he has muggle blood running through his own veins. Maybe he should Avada himself. That would be funny.
At the moment I'm in the ballroom with all the other male Death Eaters as Voldy (my nickname for Voldemortit sounds much better) sent ass the females out and I'm happy, well as happy as a Malfoy can be because Pansy is no longer around me and hanging on like I would leave her lost in some desert…actually I would! Anyway so I'm sat there right and I get this tingly feeling in my spine and it looks as if everyone is feeling what I'm feeling because were all sat up straighter, more stiffer and watching the ballroom doors intently.
So there we are watching and watching, just waiting for something to happen and well it doesn't, so we all start to turn around to face Voldy and there he is looking gleeful and let me tell you that is one scary look! When BAM! The doors to the ballroom blast open and six Death Eaters waltz in huddled around a lone figure in the middle. The servant!
They slowly travel up the long aisle created by everyone that was in the room. All we could do was watch intently and try and figure out who this servant is. I knew my father knew who it is because it was written all over his smug looking face. He looked upon this servant with such pride and adoration it was odd. There was no word to describe what I felt ok maybe some jealousy but I felt much more and I don't know what it was.
They walked past me and I noticed that the "servant" turned his head towards me as if it recognised me. Of course if this "servant" was at Hogwarts he should know me, who doesn't? the weird part was that I got that tingly feeling again but it was just a bit different. It was as if it was warning me and saying "Get ready for the shock of your life". So I did, I braced my self and became ready to face a new ally at Hogwarts, and a new name for Dumbledore.
They finally reached Voldy and the Death Eaters moved away, I had a clear view and I realised something, the servant wasn't a he, the servant was a she. She turned around to face us but no one could see her face because of the cloak and its hood. The servant girl pulled her hands out from the sleeves and started to unbutton her long flowing black satin and fur cloak from the bottom to the top, with her expensive looking black dragon-hide glove covered hands. She must a Slytherin because no one and I mean absolutely no one has or could be able to own or even buy a Frucci cloak and gloves set unless they were in Slytherin.
She had finished unbuttoning her cloak and was removing her gloves. Bit by bit they revealed her porcelain skin that were just itching to be touched. As she pulled off her gloves every single girl that was in Slytherin was running through my head trying to put a name to this "servant". I don't know why I was stressing over the fact I didn't know who this was, but I just was you know, stressing.
Finally her gloves came off and I saw those ruby like nails shining in the candle and fire light. It was such a contrast, dark deep red rubies on white satin sheets.
Her hands slowly raised upwards towards her hood and I began to grow more and more impatient, silently willing her hands to go faster towards her and lift the damning hood.
Finally she started to pull back her hood and I was shocked. I was more shocked then the time I saw Millicent Bulstrode and Crabbe in the shower, more shocked when I found out Snape is a spy….
"Hello Tom"
A/N2: well tell me if i should carry on with this one or not. its all up to you guys out there that read my fics. so please make my day by reviewing and ill make yours by updating!(if you want me to anyway..) Have i told you guys that i dont have a beta? Im kind of looking for one...
