This is my first flight 29 down fic. I don't own the show or any of the characters. The only thing i own is the random story idea. The first chap may sux but i hope it gets better. Flames are alowed all i want back is ways on how to improve it.

The sun was hotter then normal so Melissa decided to chance a swim in the water. She had completed all of her jobs for the day and everyone else was just sitting around talking..Knowing that she was one of the better swimmers on the island she didn't think that there would be anything to worry about so she didn't tell anyone where she was going because she didn't plan on be gone more then 20 minutes..that was her biggest mistake.

At first the water felt heavenly on her hot and sticky skin. The asian girl should have known better then to try and test her luck but she did anyway. Going out to where she almost couldn't reach she swam perfectly well. After a few minutes she decided that the rest of them had probley noticed that she was gone. Sighing she wished that the others weren't to afraid of the water. True they did have logical concerns that should have made Mel scared of the water but she wasn't nothing could make her scared of it.

Just as she was about 35 feet away from the water she could feel something sting her foot. Finding out all to fast that she couldn't move her right foot. Try as she might it wasn't listing to her. Being the level headed person she was she instantly used all her strenght and got herself away form the water and safly onto the beach. Once there she let herself liay still not wanting to do anything because she had no strenght. Slowly her eyes closed and she knew nothing more.

" Hey has anyone seen Mel?" Nathan asked the group. It had been more then a few hours since she dissapared.

" No" They all said at the same time. Nathan could help but think something had happened to his best friend. They had the same type of connection that twins had and right now his was acting up majorly.

" Okay.lets split up and see if anyone can find her.lets meet back here in 15 minutes." Nathan and jackson ran toward the beach while the others went toward the jungal/ moutian area.

" Mel..Mel where are you." Both of the boys called. Just as they were about to turn back and object caught Jacksons eye.

" Melissa?!"

Jackson was the first to reach the girl. Instanly he touched the side of her neck and felt relived to feel a pulse beating steadly. " Shes alive thank god."

" Nathan go find the others and i'll bring her back to camp."

Nathan did as told and Jackson carried Mel back to camp with only one thought on his mind. She has to make it or hed just die.

Well there you go. I just had to write this. I love the parring of Jackson and mel. R&R